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BARBADOS I WANNA STAY

A story by DENNIS YOUNG


PART 2



...hot...hot....hot

The evening sun was stifling her stride back to the hotel room...her

thoughts stretched towards the night-date at De Warehouse ....

8pm..

Needing to catch a nap before heading out into the night... to the

dancing/freedom/cultural-gripping themes..she made a mental note about

a song and the dance which went with it..**.wuk-up the bajans called

it..upon her enquiring**..A Barman had threatened to show her this

wuk-up...but she learnt that night after watching a little lass on the

dancefloor.

She had put in some practice in her room..her headphone

on..walkman volume high..she gyrated moving IT like a windmill ***round

and round*** /she

felt satisfied..If her friends could see her now..

In the shower,her thoughts swung around to him and she questioned

herself **is it customary for someone on a six day visit to an

island,to fall for someone so quickly or is it her loneliness,playing

with her emotions?

^^no i will not let it get out of hand^^

yes a dance..a laugh.. a drink and maybe a walk on the beach..

From the shower ..to bed..to sleep...sleep ..s l e e p sl e ep

sl

lll eepp.

7:48 pm ..the watch hand grew impatient.

The taxi was late.

oh! where is that taxi..i need to get out of here: She muttered to

herself..

8:03pm. a car horn belched into the night..she hurried out of the

room..grabbing her bag in flight ..through the door..into the

dark..her

dress contrasting..

TAXIMAN .:good evening madam.

(she didn.t answer..she was angry)

The warehouse!. do you know the warehouse.? She enquired.

TAXIMAN : yes i do.

No others words were exchanged during the trip through the narrow

streets.the motor purred .the night breeze fresh and clinging.

TAXIMAN : $$ eighteen dollars

$$twenty dollars folded in her palm to his...

Keep the Change..she sighed, as she exit the car..

He looked at her with a feeling of disgust..

$$ two dollars .what am i going to do with two dollars.?.,the taximan

thought

He drove off without his customary goodnight..

she wore a satin white dress which clung to her body..wrapping

tightly around her well-shaped bottom.. some men outside shouted at

her..she did not respond..

''Hey baby wheh yuh giong so fast,.. stop and talk awhile nuh?

man would like to talk to yuh" ...the voices snaked after her.. her

white dress kissing the night and the boys goodbye.

she paid at the door and went straight to the bar...

BARMAN:How's my amurican gurl...yuh look so good tonight . like a

seven-up drink being poured into a glass..~so sparkling. ..what

would yuh like to drink?

All those questions at once..startled her...

any drink. give me one of your specials: she replied

BARMAN::A special drink for a special woman

She took the drink..her eyes darting through the crowd..looking for the

face.,the sweet bajan face,which had rescued from her loneliness .

she ached to see him again...The music /-drink took her on a flight

everyone on the

floor was having fun..shouting the words to the soca songs.

~~ .WHO LET DE DOGS OUT ..WOFFF ! WOFF ! WOFFFF.!..

She got caught in the refrain..who let the dogs out wof .. wof..

wof.fff..

two drinks had pass and only one payment was exchanged..the barman was

using this time as a flirtatious move..it would not work..(sorry

kid).

The FACE appeared in the middled of the crowd..his shirt silky and

white.to match hers..her face lit -up..oh my he.s so hansome..her heart

called out..

his smile was melting hers and she laughed inspite of her nerves..

her evening would now be complete .The FACE had arrive and she was

happy...and the music was.......wait .

There was someone on his arm .a girl dress in a black mini dress

her body shouting out for forgiveness.. and her ways would melt many

young man.s heart...

~ why was i so foolish*..She questioned herself

As he reached her ,his smile closed to a kiss .He reached forward to

kiss her cheeks .but she moved slightly.. he missed..and caught her

perfume..the smell wafting over him.. he smiled again puzzled at her

actions.. **(shouting above the noise)**

WHATS YOU NAME?.she asked

.MY NAME IS DU AWEE..(pronounce duh ar wee) ,he replied

MY NAME IS VERONICA: She replied(her eyes fixed on this girl

connected

to his arm)..

How are you, he asked .

I m fine , i.ve been here about 30 minutes,she said

the music was building and the shouting from the dance-floor was

getting

louder..her favourite song..

whoa de waterrunning whoa de waterrunning

tek it out and push it back in

whoa de waterrunning whoa.

this song was turning her on.^whoa ..push it back in..the words

sliiping

from lips,,freely...he looked at her sing the song..her body moving

with

sexual undertones..toning her her dress to a sculptured frame..his

feelings tightened..wanting to her hold her......... In her

dancing she had missed the other girls disappearance...

WHERE.S YOUR GIRLFRIEND;she asked

I DON.T HAVE ONE..THE LAST REALTIONSHIP FINISHED ABOUT A MONTH

AGO..THATS WHY I WAS WALKING ON THE BEACH TODAY.:HE ANSWERED.

SO WHO IS THAT GIRL GIRL WITH YOU.:VERONICA

OH SHE.S ..................


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