de party... jumping.. JUMP UP !

-----------------

A slight embarrasment ran through Cheryl. she was not accustomed to

being sung to at this distance.

^^ WAIT TILL TONIGHT^^



EDWIN: ~~~% < WAITING...WAITING.



(due to the sensual nature of the song.and in consultation with the

person..edwin has dedicated this song to..i.ve decided not to published

the song on the internet>) i trust you will all understand.<

( the last verse)



~ EDWIN; ~~%^...waiting till tonight



just got the best of us



so don.t ... don.t fuss



it'll be three in morning



we'll be the only ones stirring.



!...! d....down ..see -saw--riddum .( ..



tonight.. no lights.



CHORUS.::ahhh.... :all night long

till the break in this song.



..tonight ...too.. ohh ...



EDWIN left the words on her tongue .the kiss began gentle..then

accelerated into a cresendo of moans.the night air picked up the

sound... bending it towards their hearts.. it was time. ..time to get

away from there(here). from this noisy crowd.

[[ LETS LEAVE THESE 2. we.ll be back to check on them,later.]]



(lets check on Duawee & Veronica)



>From the time they entered the room..soca took over Marlene..she was

like a madd-woman jamming ..she was all over the floor..when Veronica

saw her wining (dancing). it shocked her,because she used to think

that houchie-mommas were the only girls who danced like that. MARLENE

stuck her butt out..teased the guy in front of her..and then Windmill

.its was fire in de wave for the whole partyy..it went round and

round..down to de ground..up and stick..hold it..then juk-juk juk..

Marlene.was in control..to the wuk-up artist ..she was okay. to others

she was real good..but to VERONICA . this was the ultimate dance. even

she couldn't do it.. and then there were girls there who were better

than Marlene.

* COMPETITION TIME.*



DJ: leh muh see how yuh does wine.? hold it..schhhhh .can't

play all..



THE DJ. holds up the next 45..

DJ;.can anybody here out-wine de chihauhua. man- -de one Lil Rick..

DJ:: LIL RICK Put down yuh drink and tek on dah gal deh,she think she badd.

Lil Rick comes on the floor..posing.. hand on jaw,shoulders twists to

one side

(a jam-down pose)

Lll Rick learnt that pose from some of the Jamaican reggae stars who visted the island.

DJ: TRACK COMING DOWN.. ..

THE music hit both of them .at tha same time..LIL RICK was circling

his prey.^^** he gine mash she up tonight.**^^ .Marlene stood her

ground..letting de base line slap she..and she would slap back..

IT was on. the crowd was in a frenzy..the girls shouting for Marlene to

be their champion and the guys keeping faith in LIL RICK.

LIL RICK started wid some slow wines, Marlene countered him back with

some.**.LUK MUH HERE WINES** ..then Marlene got complacent..she geh

LIL RICK 2 juks too many ..de girl crowd bawl. the boy crowd knew she

was in trouble now..* she threatened de master and wanted to get away

wid it**.



LIL RICK went to de larder. tek up de sugar bowl..tek out 2 sweet

wines..drop 2 lumps pon she..Marlene tek back. she come foward again.

put her bumper in he face..LIL RICK goes down.. he wine pon de bumper

- wine pon everything she had. .tek out he kerchef and wipe de

windscreen.. de boy crowd.bawl. .de girl crowd ask MARLENE to come

out..leh dem sen in a substitute.((.OH LAWD!)) fire in de back-seat./

more Lil Rick wines. Marlene tags uh nudder girl..still no

contest.*.MURDER IN DE DANCEHALL ..LIL RICK kill dem wid it.. it was

all over when de fat lady scream and push push down LIL RICK ...he drops

on de floor..still wining ,he gets up and spin.. **.HE DID UH NINETY*

.. the music faded out.. and he coursed out.still wining as he left the

floor to the applause of the whole crowd. .CHAMPION once again..*(

now bring a trinidadian)*

Marlene hugged Lil Rick.. they both became good friends that

night..Marlene was tired..she needed rest, till later.



Veronica saw all the action and retreated, out of the line of fire..to

the slow body-movements of Duawee. she felt safe there.. Duawee saw

Marlene vanished into the bathroom..he felt sorry for her..because

Marlene Loved to dance and he knew she was re-living the heart-break

in her head..^^~((**what made me think i cud out-wine LIL RICK--what uh

fool i was..but he learn me some new moves..uh gine back out deh fuh

he**))~~



Veronica: WOW..thats was really something..who is that guy? he seems

really popular. this is a great party..i'm really enjoying

myself..everyone's so friendly.



Duawee; are you having a good time? you know we really do need to

talk..would you like to go outside?

Veronica became apprehensive..*(what does he want to say?..what will he

do when i tell him when im leaving? what will i do when he breaks my

heart?)*

They both walked through the room full of dancing /talking/drinking

bodies..

Veronica was introduced to Brian as they exited the room



Quite nice she thought..



A few people were outside..talking. some laughing..banks beer was

the drink flowing..a few men had whisky..the air was whiffed with it..



Veronica noticed a couple in the back of the house near a car,locked in

deep embrace. it seems that love had come and devoured them..the man

leaned against a car..the woman leaned against the man..and the

leaning,leaning..lead others to ideas..ideas that held untruthfullness.

ideas that bore rotten fruits(lies). it was their love..so let them

enjoy it.. it was no-bodies business..

Duawee and Veronia held hands and walked to the big tree.



He turns to kiss her,but first he needed some answers to his questions.



Duawee: Veronica. i know we've only just met,but i feel so close to

you. you make me happy. i've rediscovered somethings about me which i

thought were lost. In two days i've fallen so much for you and i feel

we could make this into a stronger relationship. when are you leaving?

Veronica: TUESDAY! Tuesday morning.

Duawee quickly calculates Sunday morning to Tuesday. two days left he

felt a wave of disappointment flows through both of them,as he held

her.. swaying together in the night..hoping the night would stay. they

kiss under the big tree. it was begining to hurt..the missing in their

lives. they struggled with the feelings,under the big tree.it's branches

not lending support. the moon was visible when they both looked skyward

.. silent praying/hoping/dreaming..the days would be slow.

They walk back to the noise,at least the happiness of the night would

be some consolation..there were no more words left only the slow dancing

could hold them now..because in a few hours a plane would lift and on

its wings..their love would fly..fly fly away. so here in this party

,they would seek out their own comfort.ignore everyone elses .this would

be their night alone..their last full night.



FLYGIRL &TERRANCE & SAMMY( a love-wreck-tangle)



Flygirl and Sammy were struggling with their words. sammy wanted to go

outside and talk with his friend DREAD. but flygirl would have none of

it..the party was inside.the music was inside of her..plus this was her

first visit to Barbados and she wanted to enjoy every minute of her

stay.. Sammy walked away leaving her in the middle of the room(( bad

mistake sammy))



There she was, a beautiful,lonely Italian girl on a dance floor in

Barbados .( Sammy will regret his foolish move.)

the music was bouncing her ..she felt good/the music/the drink/the

people.

A young man approached her from the north end..as soon as Sammy exited

through the door. he whispers in her ear.

YOUNG MAN : excuse me, but could i steal a dance from you while your

boyfriend outside.? i promise to behave myself.

FLYGIRL : ok . he's not my boyfriend he's just a friend who seems to be

acting like a boy at the moment.

The young man reach out with his hands(gentlemanly like)

and walks her to the dance floor.the floor was full of bodies dancing

to the latest songs



^^ CHEESECUTTER WINE^^

YOUNG MAN: My name is Terrence

FLYGIRL: you can call me Flygirl

YOUNGMAN: OK. but i'll need your real name later. i don't usually

dance with strangers with no real names.(laughs)



the music>



( CHEESECUTTER..CHEESECUTTER WINE.)

>> will sit pon yuh. like uh hat pon yuh head. )

Flygirl was not used to dancing so fast..but with the large crowd

gyrating to the songs..she was pushed closer to Terrence

Another song::NINJA BIKE

Sammy walks in as flygirl was getting her ride.

URTSS... {{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{



Flygirl ignores Sammy..she was ready.

The crowd pushed them closer.

Sammy grew angrier.



( belly to belly



soft as jelly)

Flygirl was so close to Terrence,she felt him strong on her..she

couldn't move.. ( belly to belly)

soclose..now

Her mountains were peaking in Terrence's face. she jumped up as the

trottle hit..she was moving with the crowd..the dancing would not let

her get away.. so she abandoned her cause..left it to Terrence and his

bike..,



she turns around just like the other girls were..made a motion as if

riding on a bike..((oh lawd)) she back back..pon Terrence and now her

dress was riding de ninja. Terrence was climbing the wall revving his

motor..vroooom vroooooom...

((ride de ninja...ride de ninja))



Poor sammy could not take it anymore. he walked straight through the

crowd..up to where FLYGIRL was revving de motor.. he grabs her

hand and tugs__. ((to make de bike speed-wobble))

Terrence grab her hand back.. and shouted at Sammy

Terrence: HEY YOU.. GUH SIDDOWN AND TEK UH TABLET.



The large crowd joined in.::.. yeah guh siddown and tek uh tablet.



SHAME followed Sammy off the floor.to the bathroom.to the sink in the

bathroom...he cried.because .he lost his girl.

(ride on sammy.. if you keep on doing what you're doing

sammy..you'll find yourself in trouble sammy--))

OUT on the floor Flygirl was enjoying her new status as a wanted

woman..2 men fighting over her made her a great candidate for the

JERRY SPRINGER SHOW.

Terrence apologized and kissed her on the cheek..she felt happy with

him..something with sammy and her did not click.



((she just could not understand its only CYBER LOVE.))



DARCY CHARLES AND DE CANADIAN CREW.



Darcy could not contain herself.. the soca music which played in

TorontO felt different to her..she was dancing like never before..her

body became a contortionist dream.. she bend it over /under/

sideways/backwards/forwards.. anyway but loose her skirt. On

her arm she wore flag tatoos of the various islands..the

bajan.st.lucian and trinidad flag stood out..

Darcy & Annie & Chantal hung around the edges of the floor waiting their

chance at wuking-up.. some women left their men on the floor and thats

when they siezed their opportunity

DE CANADIANS WUKING UP-watch out!

Annie wid she trini-self grab hold of Topp Daug..who in turn

signalled to his partner U2 to come from behind..

The two uh dem at de end and Annie in de middle -

-CHEESECUTTER WINE..

Darcy

did not want to be left out so she jumped in and it became double cheese

on brown wheat.

(( why yuh dancing so/



begging fuh more/



yuh breking muh heart/



muh dog gine bark/



at yuh/at yuh



stop dancing suh /



and come back tuh muh /



.............()..............

DREAD AND ANNE.



Anne was in Barbados for only the second time .she had landed at 3pm

today..had a shower,then called her DREAD.

they met up on miami beach ..now she was here ..close to him, no

more long distance phone calls .no more chatting in the chatroom. .she

was here with him. They were outside laughing with each

other and at poor Sammy. Anne was drinking Cinzano dry, shaken not

stirred. Dread was on a mountgay rum and ginger-ale..



Their drinks were controlling the atmosphere...no words passed between

them only signals.. they both wanted to fullfil the promises made on

the internet..Dread wanted to show her the beach again,this time in the

moonlight..his kisses would be more meaningful then ..the night would

hide his shyness..



Anne ,an english maiden, wanted Dread to leave the party to come back to

her room.she wanted to talk to him,get to know him better.she was full

of disappointments of previous realtionships..eg: bajan blokey who turn

out to be a bajan blockhead.. she wanted someone who made her feel

special. that someone seemed like DREAD.



After knowing him ,she would love him. she would show him how English

birds flew with their wings spread apart..

Dread took her to the floor..they danced one song and left..their

night would begin on the beach.. continue with love notes amongst soft

pillows..arching backs ..another dub riddim .. to ride. to ride

... till morning..till morning..



CHANTAL&.CB & NICKKI & SCORPIO & SCARLET were all locked in

conversations on music .dance and caribbean cultural. So_

fire from New York was in a corner discussing the world situation with

Rudy Foundation. a very serious situation between these two.Rudy had

lost his Latin Girl a few days earlier so he was making it up to

himself to have a good time . So_fire made interesting conversation.

So_ fire had just been release from her books and graduated with a

B.A. in computer engineering.

she too needed to find herself..so tonight they would find each

other.



BLUESHIA & DAVID



Blueshia could not understand why David could not dance soca . she

tried at the TUDOR ROSE in London .HE FAINTED. she tried at a blues

party..the herds made him sick. she tried at the house . he couldn't

handle it,so she sent him home.. (bloody idiot.all

he dances to is *garage* and *hip -hop* and his parents from the

caribbean too)

David was miserable..all night he waited to hear songs from THE LOX

or Black Eye Peas or Master P..

Blueshia left him at the bar and danced her way into the crowd.. she

found a guy dancing by himself. she didn't ask him anything..she just

held his hands, winked and continued her motion. he smiled . he was

discovered by someone.

MUSIC:: SOCA DADDY.



(uh gine geh yuh something tuh mek yuh guh uhhh. gine geh yuh

something tuh mek yuh go ahhh.. im yuh soca daddy)

Blueshia held him close..it was one uh dem ragga soca tune ..



Dancing Guy; would you like to try my new dance..its called wet-slide.

Blueshia got excited ..she would take this new dance back to London and

perform at the Tudor Rose..she would be the first one doing this new

dance





The Dancing guy held her close,started moving his waist. Blueshia

responded in kind.. it was something like the RUB-A-DUB. she thought...

but.. wait wait.. what was this feeling in her head..down her back..

across her body.. Dancing Guy dipped her and her head fell back ..she

came up again grabbing him tighter..she was losing herself in this

dance.. more base line and waist line ..more dipping and slipping.. a

pain moved through her body . she looked at him..his eyes were close.

his fingers moved feverishly down her back..she was in a trance.. the

tighter she held on..the more loose she became... flow .in . music down

to the ground.. he touched her,,,, she quivered. >dey< .. to de

maxxxxxx..



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