BARBADOS I WANNA STAY
A story by DENNIS YOUNG
PART 5
^^OUT.!!!. OUT !!! OUT I SAY.. A Voice thundered from outside the car.
the voice awoke the occupants..they looked around,startled.. their
hands were locked together and someone rocked the car.
((aha-so thats what locked and rocked meant..))
Duawee opened the door..his eyes still recovering from sleep.. his
mind scambled for a meaning to the interruption.. he was confonted by
an old man with a walking stick..one pants leg rolled up ..no shoes
on his feet..his hands hard and swibble ..his teeth rotten and
broken..he was about 65 years old...
was he looking for a fight--duawee thought..what a fool.
OLD MAN; WHU WUNNA DOING IN DEH?
duawee eyes him up and down..he looks harmless
DUAWEE: WHY?..WHAT BUSINESS IS IT OF YOURS?
OLD MAN : WATCH YUHSELF .YOUNG PUPPY ..I OLD ENOUGH TO GEH YUH TWO CUFFS IN
YUH MOUT RITE THIS MINUTE.. whose dat in deh wid yuh?
the old man looks in the car.
OLD MAN; cheese ..she's a pretty wun.. man yuh lucky..she aint from
here..she look amurican.. BUT i just come tuh warn yuh..it dangerous up
here late at night..it used tuh be uh nice lovers lane, but now de bad
boys tek over..so i jest come tuh tell yuh tuh left bout here..ok..
(pause)
OLD MAN: skipper gimma uh $5.00 to buy a pack a cigarette.
duawee gave him the $5.00 .. saying thanks as he entered the car.
Veronica smiled uneasily..she didn't understand some words ,but did
read the anxious look on both faces..( danger in the night)
The old man sauntered off,the $5.00 warming his pocket and his
heart.. he danced away,singing a old song--showing his age &^%all
night all night miss mary anne down by the sea side wid
uh man. the hair pon she head wud tie a boat..and water in she
^^^^^^>> wud sink a boat.. lada lada dah dah.
The song drew a smile from duawee.. he remembered his grandfather
singing that song,but this old man chose the wrong lyrics..~he wanted
to sink a boat with mary anne..~
Duawee: lets get out of here.. i'm hungry.. we'll go by Junie's
,Marlene's mother for dinner..you'll taste some real ole -time bajan
cooking...
Veronica : OK.. I'VE had my rest. lets go.
The car engine awoke too.. shifting gears . reverse.. over
bumps..^^.. between trees..small cart road...an uneven ride to the
main road .. joining other cars to various destinations..the air was
much safer now.. Veronica drew herself closer to Duawee..~after a kiss
like that she felt it was her right. she should not have to ask
questions. he was hers today and tomorrow and ... oh damn! i'll be
leaving on Tuesday.. she thought..~damn.. i nearly forgot.. i have to
tell him..i'll wait until he asks ..it'll show he cares..~
small talk entered the journey home to Junie's ..he liked her from
the beach..he liked her more from the night-club(warehouse). he liked
her even more in the room ..wrapped in the towel.. he liked and liked
until he loved her, as she laughed .. the picture sunset had made
them love,and the calm of the day..sand /waves/ breeze had brought them
love.. the love was slow a-coming..but when it came it surprised
them..full lips and body aches..they kissed and kissed themselves to
sleep..but the love is good..they both felt new and improved.
THE car slid it way to the side of the house. .a light darkness
surrounded the area..some small children were still playing a game..
trying to steal the last bit of light from the remains of the day. the
laughter from the children held Veronica for awhile.this is how she
used to be..her childhood days filled with fun and laughter.the games
she played in the hot summer sun. the thought threw a small smile on her
lips and a wish in her heart.. what happened to those days?
today's*DAYS* were now fraught with danger .all the killing and the
drugging and the crying and the dying .dying.dying. It hurted her to
think some of her friends would go that way.its not what they had
dreamt about on the stoop of their homes..years ago.Some wanted to be
doctors.lawyers.nurses...She dreamt of being a teacher. she wanted to
teach children about her world.put pride into their lives,but somewhere
between the stoop and hop-scotch..the dream got deferred.. put on
lay-away.. some friends had gotten caught in drugs and the killing
eventually dying..their mothers crying.
we sit on the edge of tears
our lives stretching.stretching
and our hearts emptying.emptying
into prayer
Marlene's touch released Veronica from herself.She felt a small chill
move through her..like some spirits from her past were pushing her
forward.
Marlene: "American Gurl..come long we ready tuh eat..Yuh en hungry?
wheh you and Duawee going tonight? Wheh wunna went all DAY?
Veronica got confused with all the questions. she grabs her new-found
friend's arms and hurried up the steps.. entering the room..a sweet
smell wafted towards her nose.. she was ready to eat. Duawee was
playing with the cute little baby.. he was making baby sounds.
Veronica wondered how would he be as a father. (hold that thought).
Everyone gathered around the table .prayers were spoken and the sign of
the cross + was made.. thanking god for the meal and praying the
world's children would soon end their hunger. RICE & PEAS. CHICKEN
.SALAD .MACARONI PIE. SWEET POTATO ON DE SIDE. A PIECE OF YAM TO KEEP
THE POTATO HAPPY. CUCUMBER..TOMATO GREEN..BEANS..
Veronica wow! all this food..it looks great.
she was very impressed.
Everyone remained silent for awhile..so much food. this was the only
time Marlene hardly spoke..except to ask for the salad bowl to be
passed to her.. Junie kept looking at the door as if expecting someone
to enter. Duawee kept playing with the baby.Marlene's sister was not
there. the baby kept Duawee busy./smiling a cute smile filled with
curiosity.. A small face appeared at the door. a boy
full of smiles
BOY: ms Junie uh here.sorry uh late..gud evenin evvabody.. muh muther
seh thanks for duh rice and tin uh corn beef..she gine cook them .
tomorrow Sunday..she seh she also praying fuh yuh.. and she gine come
tuh see yuh monday..
The boy was poor.his appearance betrayed his plight..there were holes
in his trousers(pants) and holes in his shirt .he sat on the mat near
the door,his eyes on the bowl of food and ms Junie..they both smiled
at each other . the small face did not look up from the bowl..his hunger
was too strong. the baby looked at him sitting there. She wondered
who he was.he came here every evening except sundays.he was part of the
family,but under a different name..Marlene liked him too..he passed on
messages to another boyfriend who lived up the road.and he would husk
coconuts and give the milk to her..not wanting any money for this
deed..he was a generous boy always ready to help/ At the end of the
meal.empty bowl .he stood up..his eyes catching Veronica. he turned away
quickly,full of shame..he thought of himself poor and half-naked..his
plight exposed to a stranger and a pretty stranger at that. he hurried
to the kitchen to lay the bowl down.
BOY; MS JUNIE (his voice brighter now)..ms Junie. can i go watch t.v in
de front room? ...cartoons on . ms Junie nods her
approval.
the boy skips his way through the room ,making sure not to make a
noise .he turns the television nob.the power lit up the room.. he sat
on a small chair and his smile returned happy
cartoon/happy boy.a happy life.
The table diners were still in the midst of their dinner.the food was
good .At the end of dinner Junie cleared the table..asking if anyone
wanted desert..NO NO NO..the 3 replied..too much food.
she returned with a pitcher full of mauby. a real bajan drink. Junie
asked Veronica if she would like a soda . Veronica wanted to be
native.she would drink anything Duawee drank. she asked for a long
glass of mauby .Everyone waited to see the glass -iced with the brown
liquid- squeeze its way pass her tongue.(if you are not bajan or
caribbean for that matter--this drink does surprise.)--its bitter taste
-first/ then ice takes over second/.then a sweet taste lasting to the
end of the empty glass..) how will she handle this? IT TURN OUT TO BE
AN EVENT
^^^ VERONICA DRINKING MAUBY^^^
SHE took the glass..looked at the ice floating on the top. held it to
her lips. everyone held their breath.even the boy and the baby
gathered to witness the initiation.the tv went on pause .it's sound
muffled..they all swallowed as she drank . her head held back.
at first the bitter taste made her eyes tightened,then the ice broke
her free ..melting her into a sweetness to the last bit of sugar .she
had never tasted anything like it .it left her refreshed ,ready for
another glass.her body tingled..(ohhh sweet.).she laughed at the
audience who had gathered to watch her fate.they all shot back a
surprise laugh..the boy returned to the cartoon. the baby crawl up the
little boy looked at him. smiled,then sat down to watch cartoons.
A phone rang. Marlene rushed to answer it
Phone Voice:: hey Marlene...how yuh gine?
Marlene: i'm fine. who is this?
Phone voice:: its Brian. yuh play yuh en know me de other night at de
warehouse..uh see yuh dancing wid Tony..man yuh brek he up. yuh
couldn.t try dat wid me.
Marlene: oh i din see you ..i had a good time though..you?
Brian: yeah i had a good time ..dah dj..from england..whu he name
again..ammm ammm..yeah yeah JAYLO.. he badd boy..he real vex wid he
music..and i like the local tune that he play too.. by the way is
Duawee there? i have to tell him something.
***
Marlene; yeah he here...wheh you gine tonight? i gine mackys?
Brian: mackys en sehing nuttin.. um gettin dead .now that he put de
grantley-hand tuh $10.00 .it used to be $6.00..but he getting greedy..i
gine to a special function..yuh want tuh come..get duawee tuh bring
yuh..by the way who dah babes he was wid at the club. i din want tuh
come over there..it would look like uh blocking. she real pretty
though.boy he lucky as shite.. i did working pon a swedish chick.get she
hotel info..de digits(phone nbr) tuh wheh she staying. just tun muh back
tuh get she uh drink..when i get back..i see she pun de dance floor,.
dancing wid dah hard back -pouncy.-face shite-hunn ..dah guy from
st.john ..de one dat does wuk up bad pon evvabody..whu he name.?
Marlene: i hate he.. he come rubbing pon me infront uh tony. i geh he
one dirty look.. he name Desmond*de flash* Green. i can.t stan he. he
tinks he is god.s gift to woman.always in yuh ear wid he gold
teet..shining brighter than de club lights..and dah after-shave he does
use..smell real cheap.. . so wheh this special function ?who gine be
deh. i know you know some people--so string muh de hook-up.
Brian:;.awright..leh muh see whu duawee gine do first.
Marlene shouts::; DUAWEE.Brian pon de phone. he want you to bring me
wid wunna.don't left .i gine and bathe(shower).. wait fuh muh hear?
.
Duawee takes the phone. he threw kisses at the baby and Veronica..junie
saw and smile.. the little boy was still there watching t.v.with the
baby in his lap..they made a wonderful picture.
DUAWEE: yeah.whats up Brian.
Brian; boy i got a sweet hook up tonight. there.s a party being thrown
at the HOYOS BROTHERS house in christchuch.yuh know dah big house when
you drive pass wildey.de one on de hill with de big verandah. and nuff
securirty. well dats where de party is tonight.i get a special
invitation and i tell me partner i bringing you. i don.t know if yuh
want tuh bring dah chick wid yuh..nuff food((girls) gine be deh. some
from America and England.so mek a trek .i gine geh de word at de front
gate..bring marlene wid yuh. uh want tuh dance wid she..awright..heres
de phone number.. 422>......96.
DUAWEE; have it...see you there.
Brian: awrite..peace.
CLICK.. click.
DUAWEE; Veronica.we have a party to go to.so let me take you back to
the hotel..and you can change..and i'll pick you up about 10pm.
Junie..i"m going to take Marlene with me ok.
Junie: boy she don.t like to stand home and keep muh company..By the
way Veronica,uh forget muh manners yuh see de little boy sitting
there.his name is Mike Andrews. he me boy. .love him *pause* a
smile* he's the son i always wanted.
small face Mike looked up and made a cartoon face at Veronica..she
returns the look..
Veronica went over to where he was seated. touching his head as she sat
next to him. she whispered something in his ear. small face
Mike looked at her sheepishly.
Veronica handed him something from out her purse.
Veronica:..go buy some chicken and other groceries with this. and
there something extra for you..too.
small face mike look in his hand. he counted the notes from their
edges..10 ..10 ..20..20. 20 .5.. = $$$ 85.00 big dollars for small
face Mike to have..he trembled at the sight.. a tear ran from him..a
thanks speading through his heart. His love resting on the stranger
face. he grab her and kiss her. the tears swell inside of him and burst
out of his face.unto veronica.s. top..wetting it with gratitude and more
love.
small face Mike;;thank you Ver... Veronica.. now my mother can buy a
new dress to wear church and we can eat good tomorrow. i m going to the
shop before it close and get these things .. thank you again..ms junie
im gone.. tek de baby off de floor..she dribble all over muh leg.. i
gine come tuh see yuh tomorrow.. alright.
ms Junie: don't worry mike. just go get them things fuh yuh mother and
go long home and sleep.
Duawee looked and loved her more,because even though he knew mike a long
time.he didn.t see him as poor. he saw him as human. Mike was only
part of his village.his old days.he would give Mike money to buy sweets
and other things .but he didn't go that far..he felt guilty for a
minute.. maybe Veronica taught him something.. *HE GREW UP
HERE. PLAYED MARBLES HERE. WENT TO PRIMARY SCHOOL HERE..KNEW EVERYONE IN
THE VILLAGE. BUT DID HE REALLY KNOW THEM. DID HE REALLY PLAY THERE..HE
GREW UP THERE AND MOVED AWAY .WHAT DID HE RUN FROM?..was it mike .s
days he was ran from .? IS thats why he never saw mike
as poor .because he was once like Mike ? ..
small face Mike : THANK YOU. my mother will pray for you and i will pray
for you. you are very nice and pretty*** ((( notice how mike.s accent
changes now that he was addressing the pretty stranger..trying to
impress her))) .. ms. JUNIE im going tuh de shop.yuh want anything?
JUNIE: NO MIKE. i see yuh got a crush pon veronica.what you trying tuh
do?.. he trying tuh horn yuh Duawee?(LAUGHTER). he play he talking all
sweet tuh she.and smiling. well well..yuh tink yuh is a man allready.
yuh betta guh long before yuh mother come looking fuh yuh. Here.s a
kiss (*). Mike blushed .said goodnight and
left. his eyes upon Veronica.
Duawee : well. we got to leave ..where.s Marlene.she's taking so
long.like she dressing for a wedding. Junie. im going to see you at
church tomorrow . when we get back you.ll be sleeping. so we.ll talk
after church tomorrow. ok..where's.this girl? MARLENE...HURRY UP.
Junie: so Veronica..will you be at chuch tomorrow.?
Veronica :yes.just as long as Duawee.comes for me.what time will you be
there?
Junie: ill be at the 10 o.clock service.
Veronica:ok ill see you there.
Junie: alright.. MARLEEEEENE.. MARLEEENE. hurry up..they are ready tuh
leave .
Marlene came out dressed in a baby doll dress..legs fully exposed..
-she look real good.
Marlene kissed her mother..bent over and kiss the baby.and headed out
to the car..she was ready to parrrrtyyyy.
Veronica took the baby off the floor..
Veronica: oh she's heavy.
Junie took the baby after the kisses were spent on her forehead..Junie got
her kisses on her cheek.
JUNIE (looking outside) And you Marlene.don't wake me up in the
morning singing dem old foolish songs..(shouting)- BE CAREFUL .HEAR
.. I gine wait up fuh Lorraine .(the baby.s mother).she works so
hard..awright see wunna later..don.t forget church tomorrow
Veronica..we'll be looking for you.. have a good time.. Junie calls
duawee before he gets to the car.. Duawee come here a minute.. she
whispers in his ear.
JUNIE:^^**Duawee boy she real sweet .you see whu she geh mike .dat was
a real nice gesture. and nobody asked she to do it. she real nice.so i
would like you and she tuh be friends fuh a long time..women like her
are few and far between..so you know what to do. ^^ guh long now -have
a good time^^.
Duawee answered as if being chartised.
Duawee..i know . i do like her a lot and i've only known her one
and a half days..i met her on the beach.. and went to....
Junie interrupts when she sees Veronica looking her way.
Junie; guh long .don.t keep de girls waiting.. AWRIGHT HE COMING
NOW..SEE YUH. TOMORROW ..BYE.
Junie waves and closes the door..the night was hurrying now.the day
was almost gone. the baby was sleeping.. she rushed to the room to lay
the baby down and to the kitchen to clean .
In the car Veronica and Marlene were stuck in conversation **woman.s
talk**. Duawee stay out of it..he looked forward to the night..he really
wanted to talk to Veronica .find out more about her.there would be other
days. he hoped.
The car swung into the driveway of the hotel.the night had finally
arrived..the lights of the car caught a number of tourist still in their
bikinis and swim-wear soaking up the days fun. they looked so happy in
paradise.they laughed at every utterance from their lips.. a banks beer
hung from the mens' hands..the women tried the tiger malt. they loved
everything about this beautiful island. they held stories in their
heads to pass onto friends and family on arrival home.
The men nodded their heads as a sign of gratitude to the natives of
the land * OH THIS beautiful land..thanks for letting us visit.we hope
to be back next year*
The 3 entered the room.marlene went straight to the bedroom wanting to
check out the dresses. Duawee abandoned himself to a chair to catch
what was on television.
Duawee : i'll just sit here .whilst you get dress..but don.t get
caught up in conversation with Marlene..we still have to go by my house
so i can get dress. *a slight kiss (*) passed between them..Veronica
checking around making sure marlene would not see.** she.s still shy**
she headed off to the bedroom to gather a dress and then to the
bathroom../()\
23 minutes passed ..Duawee fell asleep within that time.. the
television had forced him into a slumber.. he awoke at the touch of
Veronica.s lips on his.((she getting bold)) .marlene saw the kiss this
time..
MARLENE sang:; aye /yahhh . sweet for my sweet.. weakness fuh sweetness.
aye/yahhh.
The car left the hotel and 12 minute later Duawee was home.
Veronica was impress .he's got a nice home.
She was even more impress when she entered the home.
^^^^^^^^^ to be continued^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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