BARBADOS I WANNA STAY
A story by DENNIS YOUNG
Thursday morning
cocks crowing.
boys taking sheep and cows to pasture
girls feeding chicken and pigs
men hurrying to canefields
women hurrying breakfast and children to school
Boys khaki pants, khaki shirt.
Girls green dress, white bodice
starched in primary school
Older boys black pants,black tie,white shirt
Older girls Blue dress,cream bodice,bowtie
ironed in secondary school
Primary school bell rings 7:45am,rush ..rush
prayers and the national anthem
School bus comes 8:04am ,slow rush to bus
noise..noise to prayers and a protracted anthem.
walkman on ears
listening to rap and dub.
Teacher confiscates ignorance and is warned by an evil look.
(boy tek dah thing off yuh ears and listen to me)
Tension in the classrooms,tension in the homes,tension in the
streets,tension on the beaches,tension,tension in the islands.
((TENSION AND STRESS--WHAT A MESS)
Morning has broken,like the first morning
children playing
men,women working
cats,dogs sleeping
on a bright sunny morning.
8:30am radio soap opera-PORTIA FACES LIFE.
8:45am story ends and reality begins
wash clothes
cook meal
iron clothes
feed chickens again
rest
pack food
walk to canefield
sit and watch
canecutter man eat
the sun beating him
he beating cane
he drinks mauby
and spoons food
into his tired face
fresh cane juice
for children
dressmaking
phone rings
^howdee^
talk
5 minutes
finish dress
school bell rings
children
run home
eats meal
runs back to school
radio:obituaries
silent respect to death
rest 1 hour
before cooking
evening meal
sleep/dreams
perspire in
afternoon heat
heavy on eyes
and body
~!!@)~!!
3pm school bell ring
puh ling! puh ling!
lil boys and girls
scramble shoes
out of doors
teachers' relief
book bags
knap-sacks
shoulders high
laugh.
boy likes girl
teases
boy pulls at girl
runs
girl slaps at boy
misses
smiles and sweet looks
puppy love
blooming
girl hands letter
to boy's sister
sister shows her friends first
then brother second
boy cuffs sister
on hearing of sister's betrayal
sister tells mother
mother reads letter
laughs
then beats boy
enunciating
with every lash.
*uH seNd yuh schOOl tuh learn
and yuh goNe lookinG
fuh wOman
yuh haRd-ears boY.
whu uh tell wunna childrun
~hard-ears yuh wun hear
then hard-ears yuh gine feel~
now go read uh book*
lashes and reprimand
go hand in hand
girl gets lashes too
*you should never
betray your brother*
lashes end
eclipse biscuits
bakes and lemonade sweet
helps victims
forget about the stings
of the whip
Laugh cartoon
finish homework
run outside play
cricket and dolls
boys and girls
Father arrives home,tired
listens to cricket score
West Indies 290 for 4
Lara on 154 not out
jumps and shouts
shower away the smell
of burnt canes
then rest on settee
sigh/sleep
snore
wake
laughs
at boy's letter
then remembers
deja vu
at school
with girl
now called darling wife
reminds her of same situation
she feels ashame
calls boy and girl home
and over dinner
give both ~a $3.00 forgive me bribe~*
day running out
father walks to shop
to argue his points
on politics
and cricket.
returns home
children asleep
wife waiting up
for hug
and bed
day ends
cricket(insects)
beeps through the night
moonlight
streams
through windows
until dreams
ends
in the morrow
friday.
(a day in the life of the caribbean)
A full day opens up for Veronica .Early breakfast with baby and
Marlene;waiting to go home.Duawee is staying home today and tomorrow.
It feels like days,since she last saw him .she wants him so bad.
Shorts on.It's going to be another hot day.
Car awakes,drones and comes alive.Baby strapped in back seat with
Marlene. Veronica sits quietly,her mind meandering through
events of the past few days.She wants him now.(it must be the
mauby).
27 minutes later Junie's house comes into view.car pulls up.Junie
runs out,her long skirt flapping in the wind.She runs to the back of
the car,opens the door and takes baby from seat.Kisses all over
baby's face.
Junie;Did yuh miss mama..puusghshsjs.sweetie puhhsssshfffaa.(kiss)
uh miss you so much..how is muh sugar-plum..puhhssshffaa(long smack
on cheek) love yuh.
Marlene: mummy yuh en see me here?i'm yuh daughter yuh know.
Junie looks away momentarily
Junie: How are you all doing today? Veronica sorry about my
manners,but i miss my baby so much(ksses baby again).
Lorraine has already left for work.Junie was sweeping when the car
arrive.she had left the broom leaning against the wall,with a dustpan lying
nearby.
Marlene; so,where are we going today?the beach,the bajan queen.where?
Duawee had not made any plans.He wants to stay with his woman and
not be disturb.He makes no comment.
Veronica;I don't know,we could go to the beach with Leslie.
Marlene; i'll get my things...mummy call Patsy and see if she wants
to go the beach wid we..is that ok D?
Duawee;It's ok Marl.hurry up and get your things.where does your
friend live?
Marlene; Bank Hall..mummy call Patsy please?
At the end of the phone Patsy says yes,hurries off to ask her
mother,then packs her bikini and towel.
Junie is happy to be home.she hugs the baby until sleep comes.
Baby in crib.She continues sweeping the dust off the floor and
into the pan.She tells Duawee about her Aunt Sis, who is recovering
from flu.A sadness appears in her voice.she continues to sweep,even
after the dust has disappeared into the pan.The floor is clean again.She
continues to sweep.She talks about sickness,Aunt Sis and the Lord.They
listen.she sweeps until a tear runs down her cheek,squeezes its way pass her
nose and falls on the floor.Junie notices the tear lying on the clean floor
and wipes her eyes.She pushes the other tears back.Duawee takes the broom
and pan and returns them to a cupboard.Veronica makes her a cup of tea
.There is silence.It feels like an impending doom hovering overhead,like
grey clouds on a rainy day.Marlene enters,see her mother's sad face,drops
her bag on the floor and tries to comfort her.Junie SMILES.all is well,for
now.Everyone in silence.
Junie; Why don't yuh all go and enjoy yourselves.I'll be fine.
They take her words as a signal to leave.kiss sleeping baby.kiss Junie
Car > Bank Hall>> Patsy.
On the steps,leading up to the verandah, Patsy sits with her mother.
The car arrives.Patsy waves to her mother and starts gossiping with
Marlene as soon as the car's door closes.Duawee waves at the
mother,as he pulls the car away from her eyes.The mother looks long
and hard,until her daughter's head is out of view.She prays silently
for her safe return,then returns to housework.
Patsy remembers her manners,says hello to the front passengers,sighs
and continues gossiping.
Duawee: I almost forgot,Brian called yesterday.he wants us to come
over to Ingrid's hotel.she leaves today.
They reach the hotel,Marlene and Patsy want to stay in the car and
continue their gossiping.Duawee's displeasure forces them unto the
tarmac.At the front desk,the clerk directs them to room 138.They walk
along the side entrance,up the stairs,the third door on the left.
knock knock,,,,no answer
KNOCCCCK,,,a few seconds,door lock scratching and opens wide
eye.Brian looks bewildered,his hair untidy,in need of a comb.
Startled and confused,he invites them in,without words,his hands
gesturing.He looks around the room,nervously.Patsy and Marlene giggle.
Brian: Ingrid,it's Duawee and Veronica.they have come to say goodbye.
He ignores Marlene and Patsy.They are too busy suggesting and
laughing.
A scrambled noise from the bedroom,then Ingrid appears.
She appears and brian's secret comes out.
Ingrid walks in wearing a t-shirt,which displays a woman,dressed in
shorts,looking through binoculars and declaring LOOKING FOR LOVE.The
two O'S (O O)of the word ^lOOking^ are set in place on her
mountains,the peaks reach out from beneath the shirt.Her shorts
shows no lines,nothing underneath.Her bottom wiggles,as she walks around
the room.The girls giggle.Brian fiddles.She smiles,happy to see her friends
again. Talk awhile with cups of herb tea and soda for the guests.
Chat,chat...chatter
chat;Veronica and Ingrid.
chat; Duawee and Brian.
chatter;Patsy and Marlene.
The clock on wall signals time to leave.Lovebirds are readying to
chirp again.Ingrid hugs Veronica a long time,her eyes becoming misty
with every second.kissing cheeks breaks up the hug.They have become
good friends.Address,Phone numbers and Invitations exchange between
them.They have bonded.
Patsy and Marlene say goodbye and walk towards the door.the beach
is calling their bikinis.
Duawee nods at Brian,kisses Ingrid and walks towards the door.Ingrid
calls him back for another hug.She becomes tearful.She holds him
tighter this time.Veronica wonders__~emmmmm~.She holds him,kisses him
on the cheek,hugs him some more,pulls away,then walks over to
Veronica and gives her the same love,her tears are flowing.They are
running down her face,dripping on her shirt.
The goodbye is gone.the door closes.the goodbye is gone.downward
steps to the car.the goodbye is gone.the door lock scratches.the goodbye is
gone.the bed welcomes the goodbye.Lay away.
BRIAN & INGRID
sunlight through window
liguid center deep
kiss sweet for tomorrow
as yesterday and today
become one
lasting beyond lazy afternoons
one in paradise
another in cold
later a phone
rippling with love
will tell
no horizon too far
no river too deep
no mountain too high
no love too strong
for them to conquer.
now love bathes them
in hollow spaces
strong pushing
from ceiling
gasping
receiving nearer floor
broken eyelids
full of water
shed moments
of dripping wants
on bending knees
welcoming him.
two gasping
sounds of pleasure
exploding
little earthqaukes
shake/quiver
bodies
meshed in a daylight
stream of water
searching for her
missing and kissing
stirring
mixing
sipping
gripping
hip- in
out
in out
moving sea-saw
windmill
round and round
in out
together
in unison
in
out
in
eyes
water flow
kiss
more
turn
love in
turn
love out
quiver...shiver
grab..stab
shake head
grip tight
holding on.bearing down.into yes...yesss...yesssss.folding..creasing
hold on...hold on.....hol
e on.
hold on
ooooonnnn
Watery eyes.dry
water fed
flowers
blooming
with colour
of love
deep
into yesterday's
today's fountains
.)))@(((
Silence floats around the room,a ceiling fan is the only witness.It
spins around,gathering all it sees and storing the scenes with other
secrets.
Car arrives outside Leslie's hotel.
The hotel balconey is empty.They look for her.She appears with a
bag in her hands and a smile on her face.She immediately jumps into
the car,squeezing Patsy.She does not know the stranger.quiet
looks.Marlene welcomes her and does the introductions.Patsy says
hello and goes back into her talk groove.Leslie and Veronica continue
their conversation from yesterday.Car and driver concentrates on the
road.
They reach the beach.It is full.LOUD music is playing. Everyone stop
in their tracks.People are dancing.The D Js are moving the
crowd.
The sound systems are: DAVID RODIGAN out of London England
AFRICAN YOUT out of Los Angeles California
and
LIL RICK's CHIHAUHAU BUSINESS out of Barbados
sound clash
reggae/soca bashment
a day of
peace and love
on the
beach.
A COMMUNITY PRODUCTION.
People are everywhere;in the sea,on the sand,in the
trees,on top of cars,on surfboards,on motorcycles.The beach is
full.All types of people skanking to reggae music.The BASS from the
speakers BOOOMED reggae and dancehall.
DAVID RODIGAN: here today,will never go away...it's reggae...everyday.
(shouts)HEEEEELLLO BARBADOSSSSSS. my first visit to your beautiful
island--parrrrra dise...and the girls...wow,all these bodies.I was
strolling down broad street, yesterday,looking for something to buy.
I could not believe my eyes.i forgot what i was shopping for.It
gives new meaning to the words HEAVENLY BODIES.I'm checking on some
real estate tomorrow,,hahahaha.....before i begin my session I would
like to congratulate the promoters of this event and thank them for
choosing me to represent London. ....heeeeere i go.i'll be taking you way
back to the beginning,then i'll bring you slowly forward..first out me
box..ska. song call OLD ROCKING CHAIR,listen to the trombone and the voice.
SKA BEAT,fast and furious beat,chomping guitar riffs,trombone
sulking,scratching bass lines.
VOICE(J.O):you can roam and roam and roam
till the end of time
but there's something
i want you to know
this house is yours and mine
and when you stop running around
and want to come back home
remember
please remember
i'll be
i'll be here
in my old rocking chair
trombone..guitar bass--SKA
All over the beach,people are doing the ska dance.
(MUSIC ENDS)
African Yout-(Keith Lindo);Yeah mon,musical sound from around town.i
man here will be blowing tunes from early 70's, my era..tek uh ear to
dis one.Dennis Brown AND Big Youth in a combination style..song
call RUNNING UP AND DOWN.
SONG:
Dennis Brown; running up and down
wouldn't help in this timw
you've got to have a positive mind
Big Youth; positive mind yout man*
take uh stand
stop yuh running
stop yuh shooting
stop the looting
stop running up and down.
Keith Lindo chants; Ninety degrees down here baby..kinda warm..Jah's
love spread all over de land...so here i go..into Big Youth's
trophy.___
(CHANTS)---and the blood gine run,blood uptown and blood downtown
..blood in the woods and blood in the country..Marcus Garvey's
words...black people will never know themselves until their backs are
against the wall..some will rise and some will fall,but black people
will never kknow themselves until their backs are against the wall.
(Sings in falsetto)__~where's Bagga Wire,he's nowhere around...he
can't be found.
(switches to record)
Big Youth chants; Bagga Wire..ketch afire bun down crossroads..Bagga
Wire was a traitor*..after i leave de gates ..no one else shall
enter..so seh Mr Marcus Garvey.
(music fades out)
Duawee finds an empty table.He calls the others over,but a
vibe from the song hits him and he is back in London in 1974..and the
words__~~~-where's Bagga Wire,he's nowhere around,he can't be found_~~~~
sends him back.He closes his eyes,letting the music move him to
skank.another mix.Veronica and the girls sit at the table,watching Duawee
dance.He invites Veronica into his new dances.she hesitates.He takes her by
the hand.It is not the rub-uh-dub. it is the skank.
After awhile Veronica is skanking,her shoulders moving up and down,
legs spread apart and body swaying.Marlene and Patsy join
in.A crowd of about 20 people start skanking.The dj notices and
replaces the song with Al Brown's version of Al Green's song -HERE I
AM BABY.more skanking...
SKANKING: an art form.
__please follow these directions__
Take out an old reggae song.something recorded around 1974-76.put it
on the turntable..or tape desk or for you rich people your CD
player. play the song once,to get a feel for the beat.play it a
second time,but this time,hunch your shoulders,cross your hands
infront of your chest,make fists,spread your feet slightly apart.now
move your shoulders up and down,to the strumming guitar or organ
.lean forward while moving shoulders.(THIS DANCE IS LIKE THE BANKHEAD
BOUNCE(1998),so if anyone is familar with that dance..have a go.now
another variation of skanking is to move your body forward like an
ice-skater,drag your feet behind you,first the left,then the
right.this is done while standing in one place.The best record to do
this dance to is SKANGA SKANGA by Rupie Edwards..a classic record
from 1974,burnt up the BBC song charts back then.NO 1,had everyone
skanking.
Oil crisis!~~what oil crisis-i'm skanking man~~
(music fades out)
LIL RICK;
CHEEESE ON..don't play all,lef some fuh me nuh. it's iere out here
today--here i go...de Lil Rick buffing pon de mike,not coming
light,gine mek it right..dem udder sounds hard boyeeee...here uh go.
song call: SATTA MASSAGANA ..by the Abbysinians
song:
there's a land far far way
where there's no night
there's only day
looking through the book of life
and you will see there's a land far far away.
satta massa ganga
ouhi iii whou a heee
......
The crowd erupts into screams and dancing.Rastas take up the anthem
as Lil Rick turns the volume down.
.The crowd sings:
king of kings
and the lord of lords
sits upon his throne
and he rules us all
look through the book of life
and you will see
that he rules us all... satta massa..
The feelings generated by this song has everyone on the beach
happy.it is a sight to behold.Whitemen,Black men,Chinese,Indians,all
types of bajans have the vibe.Tourists stop and get caught up in
words.
LIL RICK..: tune man... gine play dah one gain later...now over to de
orignator.
DAVID Rodigan: HEY you just stole my thunder..you are bad ...i was
holding that song for later tonight,but it doesn't matter when it's
played..it makes you feel good..awaright next tune from me box...uh
just had to draw for this...song call BALLISTIC AFFAIR by Leroy Smart
(tune)
African Yout:MPLA by Tapper Zukie
LIL RICK:MY BEST GIRL by Dennis Brown and John Holt
David Rodigan:Police and Thieves by Junior Murvin
The day songs play from DJ to DJ,no rivalry..if the other sounds ever got
face-ty(a jamaican word meaning out of order)..Rodigan would have
unleash his big tunes and the other sounds would have packed up and
gone home.
A wonderful day.
Leslie is swimming.Patsy and Marlene are showing off their
bikinis. boys hang around.the music is pumping.Duawee and Veronica sit
waiting for Patsy and Marlene to come and secure the table,while they would
go and buy lunch.A group of men follow Leslie as she leavs the sea.She is
feeling nervous,but feels safe after she reaches her group.The men return
to the sea.The music is pumping.Leslie volunteers to help with the food.she
wraps a towel around her body and puts on a baseball cap.The lines to the
food stalls are long,but the music make the wait worthwhile.Dance while you
wait is the order of the day,along with stew food,pudding and souse,jerk
chicken(bajan style),pork chops,curry chicken .etc.etc..nuff food,nuff
drinks,nuff dancing__food, drinks, forks, napkins and hungry bellies walk
back to the table.They eat,drink,laugh,dance and sing.They are having a
wonderful time.Marlene and Patsy throw the plates into a trash
can.They relax.a change in tempo..some calypso ..it's the song
Veronica had heard Duawee whistling,on the beach,the first time she
saw him.
Remember:
EMMERTON
(GABBY)
you tell me tuh fuhget
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......
(due to copyright laws,i had to edit the words of this song and many other
songs,from the original draft.this alters some of the feelings i was trying
to create.if anyone has this or any other song i have edited,please play
them~~ i apologize)
THE afternoon sun is hot.people are in the sea.it is too hot
to dance.the speakers fall silent.Marlene falls asleep on a blanket.
Patsy is,next to her,reading a book.Leslie is lying in a deck
chair soaking up some rays,her sunglasses shading her eyes.
Veronica and Duawee change into their swim wear and run into the sea
together. Cold water/Warm water.Veronica splashes water on
him.he returns the favour.they hug and laugh.they are happy.
A swim
race challenge between the two of them. Duawee is ahead at the beginning,but
Veronica's swimming style helps her catch up and soon they are neck and
neck.Duawee will not let a woman beat him in front of all the men
watching.He is determine to win.Veronica does not want to win.She just wants
to reach the finish together.soon they are level.the finish is closing in
.shouts goes up for both of them.The women shout for her.The men shout for
him.They are level.SPLASHING . Moving their heads from side to side through
the water,their hands touch and suddenly the race is over.
They will not compete against each other.Their lives must remain equal and
not become a race.They hold each other and a sudden ~~awwwwwhh~~ rises from
the crowd.She looks at him and that strange feeling in her body returns..she
wants him .when he took off his clothes earlier,the feeling jump all over
her,so she ran into the sea to hide.she wants him so bad.he wants her
too..right time..wrong place.they hold on,letting the feelings subside.They
will wait till later.
4pm. people are back on the beach.
The music booms again...African Yout sound system blows some
dub..it's King Tubby vs Bunny Lee Downtown..wicked tunes..bass and
drum..another track Niney The Observer DUBWISE..DUBFOOLISH.The sound
echoes around the beach,the bass shakes the branches and the big
drum beat shifts the sand.
(TUNES)
Lil Rick cranks up ..he plays Dennis Brown's Money in my pocket..2nd
mix..follows up with Rockers Anthem..some serious mixes.
David Rodigan flips the switch...chaos jungle mix by Rajan
Capri..an Indian ragga tune..it's different.He follows up with a song call
STARKEY AND HUTCH by MEXICANO(Rudy Grant)
..nuff tunes..nuff love..nuff peace on the beach.
Lil Rick changes the tempo.He hits the crowd with soca from
Trinidad.A ragga soca song for the women called I WANT ME MAN.
The dance action resembles rub-uh-dub,but slightly
faster.The men stand with their hands wrapped around their
women.The women slide up on the men.listen to the chorus refain:
UH WANN ME MAN,UP UNDER ME.(NICE TUNE).
African Yout joined the fray with BOOTS by Gabby.
hear the words:
left right left right
the government boots
the government boots.
Keith Lindo (african yout) sings his own version of the chorus.He
turns the volume down.
(SING) roots roots
roots and more roots
on the head of natty
so salute
when yuh see i man
walking down de street
bible in hand
I,rasta man..
now now brethen
let we kickm up some sand
and sing;
roots roots
natty congo
natty bongo
(chants...to the end)
Rodigan is in trouble today.He is not really into soca.Someone hands him
a 45.He rushes it out of the sleeve,places it
on the deck,flips the needle on the black vinyl and the sound burst
from the speakers: SONG<> Down Behind The Truck by Lil Rick.Chaos on the
beach.Lil Rick stands up,hands akimbo,shakes his head and
starts wuking up to his song.Rodigan has gotten his own back on Lil Rick for
playing Satta Massagana earlier.nuff, nuff fun,nuff wuking up,nuff sand in
people's hair,nuff laughing,nuff peace and love.\/
GLESKE AND JYG
They came into Barbados on seperate planes.One from Washington DC.The
other from Atlanta Georgia.The name of the girl possee is SOCA
RIDDIM 2.Watch them dance.
(Krosfyah's song; No Bahavior)
GLESKE come in from Washington
to wuk up in competition
she didn't want DEV,didn't even mention
she heard about the soca/reggae bashment
and decided to start some excitement
she call she friend JYG
A mafia girl wid her own possee
walking on the beach
men string on behind dem like leech
but they put up the no disturb sign
until the soca congaline.
now watch wuh dem girls do.
a tight white dress
wid a split up de side
move on pon a man.
it was Gleske starting she action
de man thought he had it made
but after two juks from she
he shouts NO WAY,UH OUTAA HAY.
Gleske thinks
~~one down ..more to go..
Who's next
come on if yuh vex.~~
threatening words
from a wukupoligist
mek some men back down
she mek Dev run
into de sea
shouting:not me bo see.
no..no not me
uh feeling sick
go get Lil Rick
...
Lil Rick's busy playing songs
so she looks for someone else
to wuk-up pon.
it was hard
none from Tobago nor Trinidad
none can match Gleske
when she bends over
and touch she knee.
a man looking real drunk
and wearing a speedo
approach she doing a windmill flow
she look at he strange
like he got de mange
he start moving and grooving
^^*dat's a wrong move mister
yuh gine get blister*^^
watch how it go...
down pon de ground
all yuh see is bottom
up in de air
all yuh see is legs...cud dear
de foolsish man
thought he had she
when she fell on de sand
he started going down
but like the spider and the fly
he walk right into her parlor
and from then on it was blue murder
de wukupologist
had he panting
begging fuh water
he looked like a sheep
getting slaugther
de action was too hot
when he try to get up
but he jump
out of de fire
into de pot.
he back back
pon JYG and she possee
dem jump pon de man
mash he up in de sand
all de time,
Gleske shouting
~~~uh en got nuh bahavior
no bahavior,no bahavior
somebody call he mudder
to save he
from de JYG posse~~
When they finally release de man
he run in de sea
to cool off
before he become uh duppy(ghost).
The girls did their job
dem wuk down de place
and left their mark
on the pages
of the Investigator Newspaper
now de Attorney General
have all de evidence
to close down de office
because of de antics
of JYG and she SIS.
When the music stopped the women were hailed as Sheroes.Maybe now
the Government will take down Lord Nelson statue and put up
Gleske,JYG and the girl posse, dress in bikinis.They have my
support.
Bajan Queen
She flew into Barbados looking all posh,sunglasses peerched on her head and
speaking in a foreign tongue.she talked about Wallabe,shrimp on de barbie
and how she is part Aborigine.she was on the beach as a tourist,a book in
her hand,sunglasses,sunblock on skin making a nice tan and a towel to
protect her from men.Holidaying.The music hits her where she least expects
it. knees trembling and body shaking,she remembers how it was back
then.(1964).She throws down the book,throws away the towel,fixes her hair
and starts wuking up.A man approaches her begging for a dance.She signals
OK.He comes in wid some smooth wines and she fed hers back to him.(MEK UH
MOVE AND I WILL GEH YUH TWO).she gets a flashback.It's the 196o's and the
Merrymen are
playing ARCHIE BREK DEM UP.She becomes Mrs Archie.Two juks pon de
man,one pon he neck and another pon he collar bone.the man wants her
digits(phone number).she said ok and gives him the one in
Australia.He wants her address.She says E-mail me.
HEAR BAJAN QUEEN SING:
Uh feeling good.
Uh feeling sweet.
Uh left muh country for too long
now uh back home
fuh some sand,sea and love...
so mister gimma
whu yuh got fuh me
coz my name is Bajan Queen
and i sail every evening
so when yuh come tuh wuk
don't come too soon
or uh gine boot yuh
like Stephen Mendes' chat room
yeahhhhh yeahhhh
uh feeling good
uh feeling sweet..
More trouble on the beach..Bajan Queen wuking up doing the BOOMERANG
DANCE.She throws her right hip out,then slowly moves her waistline in a
circle and WAACKS before he knows it,her left hip hits him in the face.
(a new dance from down under)
;
(*0
The D Js cut the music.A loud speaker shouts out instructions.
ALL GIRLS FOR THE BIKINI CONTEST ...
Calling all contestants for the bikini contest
assemble please.
A bevy of girls run from everywhere.men start drooling,salivating at the
mouths.whistles and shouts.
1ST contestant:JONELLE(NEW JERSEY)
2ND:SWEETPEA(CANADA)
3RD:PEN PEN (USA)
4TH:CARAMEL (USA)
5TH:NICOLE P(CANADA)
6TH:IRIE INDIAN GAL(CANADA)
7TH:ISLAND GIRL(USA)
8TH:BAJAN SUNSHINE(B"DOS/USA)
9TH:PEACHES(NEW YORK)
10TH:ROSE (B'DOS)
11TH;DEE (ENGLAND)
12TH:ARLENE (NEW YORK-BAJAN)
Master Of Ceremonies: ok everyone in place...hey officer move those men back
a bit please...ok..now are we all ready?.I just want to say thanks to the
crowd and the D Js for a wonderful day,everything has gone really well.The
prizes for the bikini contest are as follows..
12th place : a dinner date with a celebrity of your choice
11th place : a moonlight pinic with EDWIN YEARWOOD
10th place : a romantic evening with RAY AMSTRONG
9th place : a cruise on the Harbour Master
8th place ; dinner for two at Sams Lords Castle
7th place : dinner for four at Pelican Village Restaurant
6TH place : an appearance in the new Square One music video
5th place : two tickets for the next Beres Hammond concert
4th place : a years supply of groceries from Juliane Supermarket
3rd place : 25 inch television and a dvd player
2nd place : funiture from Courts,music center from Cave Shepherd,50 cds
from the Number One Record Store
and the first place winner will receive; $2,500,an all expensive paid trip
to New York ,a chance to sing back up on the new Krosfyah song,a modelling
contact with NEXT Promotions of New Jersey and an appearance at the the
world famous Apollo Theatre in New York.On checking my list it seems that
the local girls have shied away from this competition.so we'll adjust the
first prize to maybe cropover next year--so good luck everyone...okkkkkk.The
girls will be parading in traditional swimwear,sexy swimwear and dress as
you dare..may the best body win,..the contestants in numeric order please.
JONELLE
wearing a blue and red swimsuit she struts across the sand, body
tight in her outfit.she has BACK.she moves towards the crowd.the ^^ohss and
ahhs^^ grow louder as she pouts her body outwards,make a semi circle motion
and moves across the sand
..style and grace
sweat running down my face
SWEETPEA
She came in from Canada and immediately fell in love with people and
the country .She wants to give something back.she signed up for the contest
as soon as she arrive on the beach.Full of confidence,her body tightly sewn
inside her outfit, A green swimsuit with a maple leaf covering the
position.more "ohhs and ahhs".movement from sweetpea. her long hair blows
gently in the breeze.
..bodyworks girl
rock my world
PEN PEN
A New Jersey resident on holiday in Barbados wears a yellow and
blue two piece swimsuit.Her movements leaves the men speechless and makes
the afternoon even more enjoyable.
..Pen Pen
tell me when?
Caramel
Student,but ready to teach the other girls a thing or two.she wears a
black and red swimsuit with frills dangling at the side.boy can she move.her
body is tough amd moves like a well crafted song.-- movements like a soca
song,her bumper doing a drum roll--.
The men go crazy, kicking up sand.The women sucks their teeth(schurrps).A D
J add a cut to the proceedings.
..Caramel
chocolate on my tongue
sweet taste all night long
NICOLE P
This was her third visit to Barbados,but her first time in
competition.She is nervous until her boyfriend shouts out her name and the
crowd joins in..NI..COLE..NI...COLE..NI...COLE. This builds up her
confidence and her chest.oh lala lala.body works.The girl mek de men shout
out --GURL YUH MEK MUH WANNNA...she feels good,smiles at her boyfriend and
struts across the sand.
..nuff love and respect
even though we have never met
IERE INDIAN GAL
A slim pretty girl with long black hair came all the way
from Toronto to be part of the festivities.The men love her body.
she blinks away the sunlight as she walks along the sand.Eyes are all over
her and her pink and white swimsuit.her body speaking volumes and the men
mouth listening to every drop of sexiness.she is a bomb.
..girl just one more time
when yuh ready..gimma uh sign
ISLAND GIRL
Chhezzee on bread..this girl is oozing sex appeal and i'm
appealing for calm.She is wearing a bright yellow simsuit with purple
dots.she walks,spins and dances.men are dribbling.her eyes brown and
teasing.long legs all the way to heaven.she is the bomb.
.. yo! island girl
come rock my world
BAJAN SUNSHINE
a surprise entrant.but good body nonetheless.she wears a aqua and
marine swimsuit.the national colours.A D J plays a dub song.she struts to
the bass lines.The look of a well sculptured body with the curves in the
right places..de gal got de men dribbling.some girls to leave the scene.too
much competition.
..bajan gal yuh body bad
yuh mek muh wann wuk up
like uh from Trinidad
PEACHES
she walks out to the edge of the sea,all eyes following,she bends
over,takes some water and splashes it on her legs and body.the audience
gasps.the water glistens from her swimsuit and legs.A man rushes out of the
crowd,lifts her up and kisses her.everyone is shock,except her.she knows it
is her husband.she laughs,when her feet returns to the ground.he is
happy.they are so much in love.
.. Peaches and cream
love supreme
ROSE
The one and only local girl..REPRESENTING ..body tight in her outfit,a
siren red, bandeau-style, monikini.it looks like a one piece with lots of
cutouts.Rose steps across the sand,her body draws breaths from the men and
sighs from the women.The men are in awe over the way she moves..they take it
personal..there are shouts of ~~gimma yuh digits~~ girl i wanna be yuh man~~
do dah one more time~~.
..she smiles and walks away
shashay..shashay.
(technical advice provided by Cynthia Clawson..i know nothing about women's
clothing)
DEE
her hair trailed down her back.the girl has back.a red and white one
piece hugs her body.more catcalls from the men,more cut eyes from the
women.she struts along like a professional model.her eyes reads the judges
looks.she winks and turns around.the crowd beg for more..she keeps some,in
reserve, for later.
..pop pop goes my weasel
kisses down by your navel.
ARLENE(ARLEE)
What a bod.another hit with the men.she wears a one piece
decorated with blue and yellow flowers.she feels the sand between her toes
and closes her eyes.Paradise.her homeland.she walks up to a crowd of men
and kisses two of them.the men stretch their hands out, begging and staring
wide eye.one of the men gets a slap from his girlfriend.the crowd laughs.
..yuh body correct
uh hurt muh neck
MC; OHHHHHHHH...MY MY MY.. I'm glad i don't have to judge this
contest...wid bodies like these maybe we should change the theme of the show
to bikini confess.. makes me wanna confess..let's give the
girls a round of apllause.
CLAPS..AND WHISTLES
the girls paraded in the sexy swimwear.
then in dress as you dare.
pandemonium.
results:
12th place;Iere indian gal
11th: pen pen
10th: sweetpea
9th : bajan sunshine
8th : nicole p
7th : peaches
6th : caramel
5th : dee
4th ; island girl
3rd : arlene
2nd : rose
1st : jonelle
The prizes are given out.Jonelle runs over to Pen Pen.
JONELLE:Hello how are you.i would like to exchange my prize for yours..you
see i would do anything to be with Edwin. i love him so much.
PEN PEN;NO i can't it would be against the rules,besides i want to have the
date with Edwin.
Jonelle goes into her purse and bring out two benjamins...$200.00 US.she
places it into Pen Pen's hands.Pen Pen says nooo,but changes her mind when
she remembers the first prize is a trip to crop over.
PEN PEN ; ok,but let's clear it with the organizers
The organizers look at Jonelle with a strange look on their faces.It readS
ARE YOU CRAZY GIRL?
Jonelle's face answers back...YES, I'M CRAZY 'BOUT EDWIN.
MC: we have an anouncement to make..the first prize winner has just handed
over her prize to the eleventh place winner.she says she will give up her
prize for the picnic date with Edwin...boy Edwin yuh hard ...fuh real.
Edwin is surprise at the anouncement and wonders why this girl would do such
a thing.She comes over to him waving a piece of paper.
The girl is serious.she pushes the other girls out of the way and hugs
him.she wants to kiss his lips,but he gives his cheek instead.the date is
set for Saturday.she is in luck,because Krosfyah is in the studio
recording,so he has plenty of time on hand.
The other girls are satisfied with their prizes and walk away
smiling.Peaches' husband is happy.his wife is a star.hugs and kisses.
The D Js crank up their sound system.DUB
Veronica and Leslie walk over to the changing room.they shower SEA salt off
their skins.other girls are in the room.some of them walk over to them,on
hearing their accents.some from Canada and some from the US.they laugh and
shake each other's hands.Back into their party clothes they walk back to
Duwaee,who is talking with Brian.they introduce Leslie.Shake hands.Brian
looks real sad and that is understandable.his love has left and he will not
hear from her until tomorrow.maybe the music will cheer him up.
The sun fell behind the clouds.the beach becomes less conjested. Duawee goes
to shower and change his clothes.Brian stays with the girls.It is a
beautiful evening. SUNSET.
David Rodigan; right about now..it's time for the lovers' session,so let me
introduce me partner in crime..Greg B. he'll be playing the old school
type of R & B also known as deep soul.
GREG B: thank you Rodders.Let me start my session with one of my favorite
songs from way,way back..if you remember,please sing it aloud to your
love..song called..LET'S GET IT ON.by Marvin Gaye.
Bodies close in on each other.squeeze.cheek to cheek.close eyes.legs
apart.rub-uh-dub.slow jam.moonlight love affairs.they are getting it ON.
~*(WRITER'S VERSION OF THE SONG)
ohh baby..i would really like to try
you this time ...and
and.. maybe you let me in
it's hot this evening
temperature is rising
and rising
like i am
so come on ..come on and
cool me down
cooooooollllll
me down
and let's get it on
baby...
let's get it on...ohhh sugar.
.
AFRICAN YOUT; bandit tune from de man Rodders and Greg B...well i have some
in my arsenal..peeps stay where you are..this is African Yout sound and DJ
PALADIN here..i'm taking you back too..sing along with the chorus when i
turn the volume down..this one from 1973 ...way back... 26 years and still
stays fresh...it's the DRAMATICS...song call: IN THE RAIN.
Veronica is in her groove.she holds Duawee's hands and leads him out, into
the rain.
song;
i wanna go outside
in the rain
you'll think i'm crtazy
but i wanna go outside
in the rain.
************
************
(CRUCIAL SONG)
PALADIN: don't move..another one...same jam..Dramatics singing LIFE OF THE
PARTY.
SONG:
tonight is the night
i'll see her again
but she'll be with
another man
*************
*************
*************
till i almost
cryyyyy
oppss eee baby
i laugh so hard
i almost cry..
VERONICA begins to cry sunday's departure tears.the loud sound muffles her
sniffling.she sits down after the song ends,leaving Duawee to stand alone
with Leslie.
:'
Lil rick: Uh ready tuh play me love tunes and yeah uh gine play all..tune
pon me deck call WHAT'S WRONG WITH MY MIND.by BLUE MAGIC... listen to this
one and weep.
song;
what's wrong with my mind
what's come over me
i thought i saw your face
standing in a crowd
(it wasn't the case)
It's a jam. a blue lights in the basement jam.Veronica gets up to dance
with Duawee,but Leslie has taken her place.she is annoyed with
herself.Leslie is enjoying the evening.she wishes Chris was there to hold
her.the song ends.she thanks him,then walks over to Brian..Two lonely people
needing love,standing in the beautiful,moonlit night. what's going to
happen?
GREG B:
I'M here to make it happen. another song for the lovers.remember this
one .ONE LESS BELL TO ANSWER SUNG by the DELLS
(please play this song,if you have it)
PALADIN:
Slow jam babies ...all the way live...here's a song
very close to my heart..give a listen.. song call -I CRIED ALL THE WAY
HOME...by..(????????)
Editor__(if anyone knows who sings this song and the year it was released
can win a prize,,please e-mail me with the correct answer and you will win
a sur-prize) E-MAIL.... 0KRAS@HOTMAIL.COM
LIL RICK; more tunes coming your way...it's Larry Graham singing ONE IN A
MILLION YOU.
words..music
Lovers Night.
Away in the distance a group of men and women gather around an open
fire.they are laughing and singing aloud.a lot of food.PICNIC!
Man: hello,i'm sorry to interrupt you,but someone told me you made these
devil eggs and i wanted to find out how they are made..they are very (bite)
good..amm..great.
Cynthia(devil egg woman); oh thank you..i try my best..well let's see.first
the eggs must be hard cooked,,,not hard boiled .the difference between hard
cooked and hard boiled eggs are how they are handled.bring the eggs to a
full boil.then turn the fire off,let the eggs sit in the saucepan for about
30minutes.this eliminates the green colour from forming around the
yolk.after cutting eggs in half,take out yolk and mash with miracle whip,not
mayonnaise.prepare mustard,salt and pepper to taste,add some sugar and a
little sweet pickle relish.then fill egg white halves with mixture,adding a
dash of paprika..and there you have it...DEVIL EGGS.By the way my name is
Cynthia,what's your name?
Man; My name is Alvin..hehahaha.how ironic...you name is Cynthia and you
make devil eggs ...ahahhahaha.
Cynthia: sorry i don't understand..what's the joke?
Man; ok..uhuh.. DEVIL EGGS AND CYNTHIA...GET IT...DEVIL..SIN..THIA.
Cynthia; very funny..you are a comedian right?
Man; oh i'm sorry if i offended you.it was just a joke.
Cynthia; no offense taken,but if you really want something hot,come let me
show you.
Holding hands they sauntered off through the moonlit night.
(what kind of sin will they be committing this evening?)
(CORDELL AND RODERICK)
Cordell was feeling lonely even though her friends kept her laughing she
came to the island for rest and relaxation,but after three days of sun,rest
and relaxation,she needed something more.she had spied a number of men on
the beach earlier and her thoughts took her back to last year in Aruba.The
Sinbad 1970's old school soul show.she and her four girlfriends visited a
beach bar one evening and found the most georgeous men this side of Shamar
Moore.They ""oohed and ahhhed "" all night .Feeling safe,back in their
rooms,they talked, talked, talked all night about what they would do with
those *fine specimen*.
Later the music,mixed with rum punch and the hot night kept her dancing with
this stranger.she had danced to Al Green,Teddy Pendergrass and The Isley
Brothers.
Her song: Isley Brothers--SUMMER BREEZE.
the words,the night and the man intoxicated her that night and when it was
over..she was feeling fine.
SONG;
summer breeze
makes me feel fine
through the corners of my mind.
(a great time--in the islands)
Backwards she leans,checking on the moon and the sky,her head falls at the
feet of someone,whose faces is hidden in the darkness of the surrounding
trees.A flicker of candle flame shows a man looking down at her and sipping
coconut water mixed with fru-tee(a local drink). On swallowing a piece of
ice his lips part to a white-teeth smile.she sits up,brushes her hair and
returns her smile.
He offers his hands.her fingers feeling his soft hands.he pulls her to her
feet.Face to face,her heart jumps.He smiles again .she jumps over her
friends for the introductions.his name is Roderick Holloway,her
name:Cordell La Dieu.
Nice to meet you.
ESCAPE FROM THE LAUGHING CROWD.
The girls sit on the blanket,wide eye and wide mouth.A breath stuck in their
chest.Out into the night,across sand,towards the music,their eyes follow
until they held her no more.They,immediately,worry about her and follow the
footsteps in the sand.
Through the crowd,pushing against gyrating bodies,they find her dancing and
laughing.They are jealous.One incident has stop the laughter.They
realise,now,this is the reason they came to paradise. To have fun without
going overboard.
Cordell pulls Roderick closer.Roderick whispers.Cordell laughs.Music has
brought them closer.she thinks of breaking away from his arms and sweet
aftershave.In her head the words filter: .~~~~ohhhhhh..please leellll
lettttt me gooo...pleasse let me go,after the next song~~~~
Six songs later,they decide to walk and talk.
Bare feet,sandals in hand,they walk along the edge of the rushing sea.She
skips away as a large wave splashes around her legs.Laughter in TWO.Roderick
and Cordell.they walk awhile,then return to the music and to the breathing
sighs of relief,of her friends.They are laughing and dancing...and maybe
later...kissing.
(GHIA AND HER BAJAN MAN)
Ghia met her friend at the After Dark Night Club,had breakfast with him at
Bubba's Restaurant,kissed his cheek from the safety of his car.At her hotel
door,she waited until his car disappeared from view.Her heart relaxed,after
she entered the room and close the door.It's not that she felt in danger
with him,quite the opposite. His caribbean accent laced her head with all
kinds of love-grooves. She had heard about those Caribbean men,who could
charm the heart out of an ice-maiden.it was true.the dance started it.~~I
should have refused~~.she thought at the time,but somehow the drink had
mixed a sex dance in her head and she wanted to..GROOVE.
Three days later,here she is.dancing with him again.He had arranged the
day.First a visit to Harrison Cave..BEAUTIFUL...she cried out, inspite of
laughter.
(A construction hat must be worn while desending the depths of the cave.It
was discovered in the 1970's and must be seen to be believe.)
Lunch and laughter.Introduction to his friends and employees.He had his own
business.She felt safe with him.
Her heart pounds against her chest.she is not ready to commit herself to
him,but she is close.Tight hugs.Kiss.Maximum.Rub-uh-dub make her legs
tremble and her head swirl with thoughts of GROOVING.she sighs.he
sighs.Without words they leave the music and take the car to rendezvous.
Ghia and her Bajan man look out of the bedroom window.After he leaves,she
sits on the bed,looking around for any suspicious women things,which
sometimes forget to leave with their owners.there are none.He comes into the
room holding two glasses.Her glass has a cherry floating on top of shaved
ice.she tastes the sweetness and enquire about the drink.He tells her it is
ginger ale mix with falurnum(a liqueur)she likes the taste.He drinks ice
tea.they sit and talk for awhile until the kisses come and lay them down to
rest.
.lm.
sip,, sip,, drink..late night..power kiss...the second kiss..the kiss she
gives him...lips full.
Touch you 2..taste bittersweet..lead on..follow into cave. made her -coil
into a shaking fever.arms outstretch.fingers grasps pillows, mountains peaks
reached.kiss down.
Torrid heat rise from dormant months, fill with circles.experimental.
shirtless.caress.arms,big, muscular gently rocking passion UP towards
sky,high above ceiling..screaming soft in nature's bosum... moving like a
train pulling out of a station> > >> >>>>>..heading into dark tunnel.he
follows her in.
sweet/pain/rain/down/on/her/\gentle/arms/slow/movements/trace/patterns/along/legs/
/weave <> towards:end:stop/then/retracing/
//loving/every/minute/of/love's/splendour/
||sceaming/panting/notes/written/in/soft/tones/
\\measuring/looking/squeezing/
{}squeezing.....squee..eehhhh...innnnn/
:champagne/flow/celebration/from/bottle""fountain.
:'grip teeth.kiss.last.stop....don't.stop.
::love,from,making,me
e-v-e-r-y d-a-y
i-n e-v-e-r-y w-a-y.
night sleep comes for GI and her Bajan man.
Meanwhile,at the reggae/soca bashment,the music pumps,people dance while the
night closes in.
David Rodigan,African Yout and Lil Rick are in a friendly competition.
~~who can spin the best lovers rock~~.the crowd will be the judge.
David Rodigan; tune call HOW COULD I LEAVE by Dennis Brown.
(the first trip-hop reggae beat)
the crowds goes wild.
African Yout: my turn..tune call Night Nurse by Gregory Issacs
(ohhh tune...)
Lil Rick; play dis one when yuh get home...tune call COTTAGE IN NEGRIL by
Tyrone Taylor
(one for the serious rub-uh-dubbers)
David Rodigan hits back with I'M STILL WAITING by the late great Delroy
Wilson.
(this is one of those lovers rock classic...the best song to dance with your
love)
African Yout digs deep down in his music box for this one.
African Yout: just wouldn't be the same if i don't play this one..AFTER
TONIGHT by Matumbi.
(a classic lovers rock,one of the originals)
Lil Rick: after tonight you will be singing this song forever.. song call
HURTS SO GOOD by Susan Cadogan.
(This song started it all,way back in London,1974/75)
The crowd declare the winner--a three-way tie.the real winner is good
Caribbean music.
enjoy.
It is time to leave.Duawee signals Brian and Leslie.Looking around for
Marlene and Patsy.They are no way to be found.Eyes through the crowd sees
Marlene in a lovers-rock clinch with a boy and Patsy squeezing the living
daylights out of another one.The song ends.The boys are relieved.They react
with more delight,when the two,kill-yuh-dead-wid-uh-rub-uh-dub,girls are
gone.
Decision,decision, -who will Brian take home?.
Leslie will go with Brian.Duawee will take Marlene and Patsy home.
Goodbyes,kiss kiss cheeks,laughter,shake hands.
gone..bye bye..see you later.
They drive away from the music.The sound drowns out the revving engines.what
a fun day that was.smiles from everyone.
On the beach the sounds are winding down.RODIGAN has another event on
Saturday at Bushy Park.He will be playing music at intermission. African
Yout will be hanging out with Lil rick,before departing for Los Angeles on
Sunday.Generators turned off and the music stop. cars and home.Lovers stay
on the beach,playing in the sand.
SESSION IS OVER.
Patsy arrives home to a happy mother,kisses and dinner.Mother waves a thank
you to Duawee.Marlene waves back.
The car arrives to find Junie and Lorraine conversing on the steps.Marlene
jumps out of the car,kisses her mother,hits Lorraine and runs into the
house.The phone on her ears:chatting with Patsy.
Junie; wunna had a good time?
Veronica; YESSS, it was best day so far..i had so much fun..i almost won a
swimming race against my honey ..(holding his hand and kissing his arm).
Duawee;yeah she almost won,but i wasn't pushing myself. i'm not the best
swimmer in the world,but anyone would be hard press to beat me in a race.
Veronica;ok then we'll have a race tomorrow.
Duawee;; ok ..one race to settle it.
Lorraine; schruupss..(sucking teeth)..de two uh wunna behaving like lil
children.. Duarwee...yuh en know whu race tuh geh she...hahahaha
Junie pushes Lorrraine and laughs
Duawee; Time for some rest.say bye to Marlene for me.I'm outta here.
Lorraine; She's in there pon de phone licking she mout like LIC MOUT LOU.she
talks all day long and in her sleep too. Anyway i gine to bed, see wunna
this weekend...bye
Junie; yeah see wunna...hey.. Veronica yuh boyfriend came around looking for
you today...he brought you a surprise..MARLEEEEN get off de phone fuh a
minute,go to de fridge and take out that big plastic bottle and bring it
here....and keep off muh phone...uh don't wuk fuh Bartel(the telephone
company)..hurry up.
Marlene gives Junie the bottle and runs back to the phone--chatter.
The bottle has a label with Veronica's name on it..it reads
To my friend Veronica
with much love
Mike xx.o.xx
Junie: (laughing) Duawee uh tell yuh he gine horn yuh.
DUAWEE; Let me get my babes out of here,before he turns up and sweeps
her off her feet.
Junie;hahahaha, guh long boy--yuh is nuff sport
Veronica does not understand the sacarsm in their conversation.she receives
a gift from Mike and they laugh ..ah well.
car..key..turn... engine on. and they are gone.
The liquid in the bottle splashes from side to side,pushing her legs back
and forth.She uses her feet to hold the bottle stationary.The car cruises
along the street, bowing at approaching cars.Their lights dim signals.Home
brings the car to its rest.
car doors open..shut..front door open..shut..fridge door opens..put bottle
in...shut..bedroom door open...remains open..bathroom door open..
shut...shower curtains open ..shut.
er-o
ti-
que.
TO BE CONTINUED.
DENNIS YOUNG
== DE DEV --
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