| BARBADOS I WANNA STAYA story by DENNIS YOUNG
 (Barbados at night)
 
 
 
 The street empty > The darkness full > Angry whistling frogs
 
 disturb the peace of the late night>some home lights have gone into
 
 naked dark.>>>
 
 quiet.:
 
 As far as eyes can see,the church people have left their worship
 
 and singing and the lights from the church hall have disappeared.
 
 Moonlight catches shadows and stretches the pea trees,tall
 
 coconut trees and grass bent over in prayer. still.>>>
 
 peace.:
 
 Stars shoot across the sky,but never make it to earth.The wishes are
 
 sleeping.
 
 A blue light shines through  a glass window.A television light
 
 spreads around the room with a snore and a whisper.A late movie,
 
 interesting enough to keep some of the audience awake.The movie is
 
 CRACKER.It stars Robbie Coltrane as a police psychologist. He
 
 is good at recognising the mind's contruction of a killer,but is very
 
 bad as a father and husband.He is cheating on  his wife.He ignores
 
 his children.He gambles.He drinks.He smokes.He is obnoxious.
 
 Tonight's episode is about a man who broods over his father's
 
 death,kills and then tries to tie the killings to a football(soccer)
 
 tragedy.The name of the killer is Albee and is played,with great
 
 intensity,by the scottish actor:Robert Carlyle..The audience cannot
 
 takes their eyes off the screen.RIVETING.
 
 The killer words --REMEMBER ME EH?,followed by his sililoque of
 
 death.__
 
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 ______!""*[*]
 
 The episode ends with the police psychologist solving the
 
 crime,ending Albee's reign of terror.A BOMB EXPLODES,as the
 
 psychologist walks away.
 
 
 
 Wake up sleepyhead.
 
 They walk to the bedroom,to the bathroom and to the shower. Small
 
 talk about tomorrow.~~~the lunch meeting with Leslie.~~He has taken
 
 thursday and friday off,so he could spend the next three days with
 
 her.They kiss and fall asleep.
 
 The room becomes  dark and the house quiet. Nothing stirs in the
 
 midnight hour. A cold wind rushes through the trees.moonlight
 
 shines through a window,making a great contrast in the room.It
 
 leaves a semi-dark glow.A coconut falls and makes a hard THUD on the
 
 ground.It falls amongst the bushes and part of its outer skin is now
 
 covered with wet dirt.Insects hasten to investigate the noise.
 
 Some miles away,the moonlight find  men on a beach,looking for
 
 crabs;little specks of light shine from their hands.They are
 
 searching holes in the sand as they walk along the beach .Someone
 
 finds  a crab.==laughter.
 
 A long stretch of sand,with jutted rocks,lay in the distance.The eye
 
 can see the outline of the coast and land.
 
 A wave crashes against the tranquility of the land.Large
 
 rocks hold firm against the sea;repelling its invasive tongue.The
 
 foam becomes scratching curse words in the small crevices of the
 
 large rocks,where smaller crabs hide.Another crash of sea rises
 
 higher over rocks and unto the faces of lovers hiding in the
 
 dark.They  are wearing the colour of the night..camouflage.The woman
 
 is afraid of the darkness and the situation in which she has place
 
 herself.She shivers against the cold and the man's kiss.
 
 The man,she met only a few days ago had sweet-talked his
 
 way into her lonely life.Now after three days of unanswered phone
 
 calls, he confessed his lie.
 
 
 
 (ANOTHER LIE...UH JUST WANNA DIE)
 
 (^""He was married with three children.he didn't mean to hurt her,but
 
 his eyes had ruled his heart the day he first set eyes on her""^.)
 
 
 
 Her disappointment sat her down .She felt like crying.Her heart was
 
 broken again.AGAIN>for the fifth time in two years.she questioned
 
 herself,but her heart persisted and his smooth tongue won out.
 
 The confessing words fell from his lips,through the phone,into her
 
 ear,around her eyes and rested gently near her heart..she was in love
 
 again.WHY?
 
 They talked for six days before the rendezvous was confirmed.She
 
 trembled then and she is trembling now.
 
 
 
 (CAUGHT IN A LIE/CONFESSION)
 
 
 
 HE knew he had lied to her.He planned it that way.He saw her from
 
 behind his dark SUFON glasses;her skirt had two spilts all the way up
 
 her thighs.Brown long legs smooth and inviting.Some young men tried
 
 to get the brown legs' attention.She looked away,sucking her teeth in
 
 disgust.He approached her with a seductive smile.She returned her
 
 smile and a conversation began.They exchanged pleasantries.No names.
 
 No telephone numbers.Just casual talk in an afternnon sun.She basked
 
 in his attention to detail,with every other word referencing her body
 
 and his eyes glinting at the sight of her thighs.After a few minutes
 
 she watched him walk away.They would meet again at the same place.
 
 Next day they exchanged names and phone numbers.She gave her work
 
 number with the extention and her home number.He gave her his work
 
 number.((it was as he had planned)).
 
 The third day she questioned him on why she could not call him at
 
 home.He lied again.
 
 __**(oh my phone is on the blink.Bartel and their repairmen are
 
 holding me for ransom......last night i really needed to talk with
 
 you,but couldn't. i was lying there in bed,beads of sweat running
 
 down my back and i kept wondering abou you. I could not sleep,so i
 
 looked around my bedroom to see if i could find other things to
 
 occupy my head,but to no avail.i couldn't take my mind off you.please
 
 tell me more about you?)**
 
 She poured her heartaches into his  plans.she felt so close to him.
 
 
 
 (a letter)
 
 
 
 DEAR CHRISTINE
 
 I HAVE MET A WONDERFUL MAN.AFTER YEARS OF LIES AND
 
 TORMENT,THIS MAN COMES ALONG AND MAKES ME SO HAPPY. I HAVE ONLY KNOWN
 
 HIM A FEW DAYS,BUT I FEEL I HAVE KNOWN HIM FOREVER.
 
 I AM JUST WRITING TO TELL YOUR READERS NOT TO GIVE UP HOPE.THERE IS
 
 SOMEONE OUT THERE FOR ALL THE LONELY HEARTS.DO NOT GIVE UP.
 
 THANK YOU
 
 ALWILA
 
 (a lonely woman in love again)
 
 
 
 
 
 The letter was posted to the Sunday Sun Newspaper and addressed to
 
 Christine,who would published it,so that the readers could take some
 
 hope and joy from the words.
 
 
 
 At night she sat and waited.******
 
 ___@___
 
 NO PHONE CALL.%%!!_________
 
 Night breezes into the living room and finds lonely.she waits to hear
 
 his voice.No phone call>%%!!___________
 
 Late night television is no substitute for his sweet words.
 
 No phone call(%%!!__________
 
 Milo in a cup with shirley buscuits helps to swallow disappointment.
 
 NO PHONE CALL
 
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