BARBADOS I WANNA STAY
A story by DENNIS YOUNG
A voice interrupts the music.
VOICE;Hello ladies and gentlemen,i'm sorry for interrupting your dancing and
merriment,but we're having the prize drawing..do you have your tickets? I'll
be reading the names out ok..there are five prizes.are we readddddyyyy? DJ..
drum roll please. first ticket out of the bag,..name on the back is...is._.
Mona Alps..your prize is a dinner for two at Pelican Restaurant and Bar...
second prize _ Tony Perrin...he wins a night cruise for two on the Harbour
Master with dinner and dancing...well Tony, we'll be seeing you on here
again .third prize_ Devine Nelson...she wins a trip for two to
Grenada,niceeee.. fourth prize.. Francine Maher... she wins a trip to New
York ..all expenses paid..Sorry Francine it's a ticket for one...it seems
someone didn't want you to take your boyfriend or your
husband..hahaha...more drum roll DJ...last but not least,the top prize-
Leslie O'Hara...she wins a trip for two to London and Paris.. all expenses
paid...now that's a good prize..i wonder if she knows anyone who speaks
french..Leslie i speak french... winners come and claim your prizes... now
back to the DJ.
The winners rush towards the captain,their tickets waving in the air..Leslie
is all smiles.The happiest winner.Thoughts crowd her head
--LONDON,PARIS..WOW.. i'm so lucky..who can i take with me? i'll decide on
that later..London,Paris..for two...all expenses paid--wow.
Leslie sees Veronica talking to someone,but from where she is standing she
cannot see who the person is.she hands over her ticket stub and fills in the
necessary information on the forms provided.
while she is walking back towards Veronica some one grabs her by the
hand.It's her dance partner who,now, seems much more interested in her.she's
a winner.
the music is blasting from the speakers...the crowd is shouting.
THROW YOUR HANDS IN DE AIR
LET THE DJ SEE YOU
Duawee is still missing.no where to be found.A SURPRISE! Veronica tries to
fit the puzzle.How? Why? Where? so many questions.
Seated across from her is the person,whom she least expected to see.in her
head questions abound~~~~ how could this be? why now? where's Duawee? why
is he staying away so long?
Veronica; how are you? have you seen Duawee?
NO...i went up on the upper deck and was talking to some of my friends,but i
haven't seen him..should i go look for him for you?
Veronica; no...i'm sure he'll be back soon..he knows where i am.
But you don't know where he is? don't you feel vunerable with all these
pretty,lonely women running about on the boat..they could snatch him up
tonight and then you'd become a pretty,lonely woman.
Veronica; I have confidence in our relationship.he loves me and I love him
and nothing nor nobody is going to break us up...if and when it does
happen then it would be of it's own accord..you know the distance between
us..two different countries,different cultures loneliness and fustration
in our relationship,as time goes by.. the impracticality of us being
together on certain nights could bring about its failure.. but for now, i'm
enjoying having him in my life..he's a wonderful person and i know many a
woman who like to be his.. if he tells me,one day,to let go.I will...but i
may not let him go..I know when I'm in love and when love's in me...when I
feel it running through my body..I cherish it with every breath I take,
...each and everyday..soon I'll be gone,but I do know that when I leave I'll
be taking his heart with me..and I'll be leaving my heart with him.Together
we'll wait on the future.What about your love life? Isn't there no one in
you life?...MS WENDY.
WENDY; I don't need a man life right now.I'm re-designing my life at the
moment and a man isn't part of the furniture,but you did make a valid point
earlier when you said you'll hold onto Duawee's love,even after he tells you
to let go...well I feel the same way about him. you see I know him better
than most.I was with him when his greatest pain devoured him.His mother's
death..he cried all day and I was there to comfort him, when his world fell
apart the day of the funeral. I brushed away his tears..held his hands,when
he felt like falling...I was the one with the KISS,when his lips trembled
with emotions and tears were falling .After everyone had left and he laid on
the bed..I laid there, breathing with him. and that night I fell into him.We
fell asleep in our clothes,as we told stories and laugh. In the morning..I
made breakfast,just like you were,the morning i came over to the house.Later
we laughed at a story he related from his younger days..he told me the last
time he had breakfast in bed was when he was eight years and sick with the
flu,his mother had brought him breakfast and she had told him
stories..I,also,told him a story that morning.A story of him and I and what
our future would be like..We,then,rested our dreams on two girls and one
boy.Later we practised at fulfilling part of that dream.We made love...
The lovemaking ..oh..OHHH..uuuehsssh.. it had no description.. Veronica..
you know after a man has made love to you and you feel like you are brand
new and you just want to melt into his arms and remain there forever. You
know the kind of good lovemaking you run out and tell all your girlfriends
about...well this lovemaking had no description and to this day,I've never
been able to describe it. It's the kind of lovemaking which leaves you wet
all day,wanting to be with him.The kind of lovemaking which makes you want
to run outside,in the rain.the lovemaking,which stays with you forever,even
though the lovemaker has gone.You know what I mean, don't you?
Veronica is stuck between shouting and the calm of her demeanour.She had
never had that kind of love-making,not yet anyway.She searches Wendy's eyes
for a hint of desperation,for a hint of evil intent.They showed none and her
seriousness lent credence to her words.She is telling the truth.Her eyes
showed it.Wendy was still holding onto Duawee's love.
Veronica: Well..well that's all in the past..there's the future and I know
his future lies with me..
Wendy; We'll see..you have to leave,but I'll remain here.The days here are
long, but..the nights are even longer...and I only need one night..just one
night,with him..
Veronica; One night for what?..a one night stand? Do you really think he'll
fall back in love with you?.I don't know what you did to him,but I'm sure
he's gotten over it and he's moving on.
Wendy: We'll see..look I thought that we could be friends after our last
confrontation.I found you to be a very pleasant person and Duawee deserves
a woman like you,but lately, I find my thoughts are switching to him and
how we used to be,my nights are lonely and cold..I miss him so much..I ..I
want him so bad..my body aches for him..like never before..I've no one to
hold me.. to kiss me,nightly, to wake me in the mornings ..you have all of
that...for now.This will seem all like a wonderful dream,but when you get
back to America you will wake up and face reality..this isn't a scene from
HOW STELLA GOT HER GROOVE BACK..no girl.I'll fight for my man..all in all
and to end our conversation.I want you to know I STILL LOVE HIM.
Veronica's eyes blinks away a hurt from the last four words.Her mind
scrambles for a reply,which makes her head hurt and her eyes fill with
water.She surpresses its volume from Wendy.
In her head,her pride surfaces ~~~~she'll never see my tears..no not from
these eyes...never will I let her see me cry.~~~
she composes herself and her anger subsides.
Veronica:You..you love him,but does he love you? Duawee and I have grown
beyond friendship ..we love each other and for your information I...I..
don't want my groove back..how can I want something which I've never lost? I
must admit that the first time I saw you I was jealous,but that was in the
beginning..now I'm much more confident in our relationship and only the
future knows for sure how all this will work out ..we'll see..Would you like
a drink?
Wendy: No.i'm going to dance my night away.see you.
Veronica watches her skip between chairs and tables and greet a man with a
long hug.The hug brings two dancing bodies together.Slow-jam
music.Veronica's body needs a jam.Looking around for Duawee, a strong
feeling of Deja Vu runs through her mind.she remembers the night at the
Warehouse.^^the same way she looked for him then,she is looking for him
now.So alone.
A threat of words has brought a sense of insecurity and she feels a need for
his arms,for reassurance .She needs a SURGE OF LOVE,because she loves
him..no one will take him away ...not now...not ever..not without a
fight..not a physical fight,but a fight nonetheless..she will love him until
he says no more,but even then....it will become a slow process.She questions
herself.
~~Why do I feel this way towards Duawee? Is it the feelings he leaves with
me,when i'm alone or is this just another love thing in paradise? How many
other women has he romanced on the beach? where is he? I need to find
him,but this boat is so large,we might miss seeing each other.If I go on the
upper deck he might be downstairs...ohhhhh I can't wait much longer.Wendy is
here circling like the shark she has become and I'll not standby and watch
my baby get bitten by her again..no way.Our love is in danger and it's up to
me to save it and save it I will,even if it makes me stay here for another
month.Hurry Duawee..I need you,now,like never before~~~
As if someone was listening and granted her her wish,Duawee appears, his
shirt wet with persperation and with a smile ready to please.He looks guilty
of a crime.She sees it in his eyes.One consolation it was not with Wendy.He
open his arms for a strong hug.His nibble on her ear does not generate a
reaction .Veronica needs answers.Her disappointment swims around inside of
her and her anger builds again.
Veronica: Where've you been so long? I've been waiting here,for over an
hour..and ..and i..
Duawee: Oh baby..oh babyyyy... did you miss me? sssschhhsss.come here let me
kiss your lips?
The kiss tries to be strong,but Veronica's effort is weak.She needs answers
and Duawee looks at her,puzzled.
Veronica: Someone's been looking for you..betcha you cannot guess who?
Duawee:Brian?
Veronica: No...female
Duawee; Female huh? let's see. Rose?
Veronica: No..wrong.
Duawee; I give up..whoever it was seems to have made you quite jealous,
because you're acting quite strange..
Veronica; It's your old girlfriend Wendy and she's dancing right over there.
Duawee; Stop playing...remember she had a ticket for the Bajan Queen and we
saw her walk over to that boat.you're just mad,because i left you alone,for
awhile.Now come here and let me kiss those lips again.
Veronica: Then who is that over there? The woman dancing with the man in the
black shirt..can you see her?
Duawee's eyes follow the pointing finger and his eyes find Wendy
laughing,her head falling backwards,her body grooving to the music. Duawee's
confused and wonders silently_~~~~how could that be? i saw her going towards
the Bajan Queen and she had a ticket for that boat..i...i.~~
He breaks off his thoughts and turns towards Veronica.He is serious and
apologetic.
Duawee: What did she say to you that has made you so upset? i felt it in the
way you kiss.Look,i'm sorry for leaving you so long,but i got into an silly
discussions about cars,with some guys i've not seen for awhile..there's a
Bushy Park Revival Day tomorrow and we were arguing about who was the best
driver to have ever driven on the race track. We laughed at everyone's
choice,because no one could explain why they thought their choice was the
best.I then danced with a couple of friends from work,but i'm back now,so
could you please turn on that sweet smile of yours and brighten up our
evening.
Veronica; Ok. i'm just mad at myself for letting her make me mad..D...I love
you .
With those three words a kiss reaches his lips,its strength full of
purpose.She holds him,tightly,around the waist,closes her eyes and rubs her
body againgst his. A crowd of eyes notices and sighs.The sighing of air
pushes them closer and closer.
A kiss strong.
A kiss to rid a frown.
A kiss long.
A REAL MEANINGFUL KISS.
A kiss,in the night,on a boat,in front of strangers,begs love to stay.
The kiss ends and they look at each other.Love's aglow inside.
HE wants HER to want HIM to *@%$%*,but time gets lost in the wind,so they
kiss again.A shorter kiss,but with the same intent.They need the fruitless
nights of lovemaking.They can feel it.They can smell it.They need
lovemaking.In a few hours an aeroplane(airplane) will come and take one love
away,up,uP,UP, into the air,through the clouds,over land and sea,leaving the
other love on the ground,to weep,to be alone,to yearn for his love's
return.In a few hours it will all change.
Duawee: Do you want to dance?
Veronica: Yes
Duawee whispers ~~I looove you.Veronica squeezes his hands and they walk
into the slow jam music and start their dance.A dance ritual full of
meaning.
SONG--FOUR DAYS LONELY-written by DENNIS YOUNG-CC-mly-1999,performed by
CAROL GEORGE.
one day of love
two days of lovemaking
three days of waiting
four days --four days lonely
no one ever told me love would be like this
how it'll you happy sometimes,then fill you with sadness
it'll stay away for a long time
a very long time
then one day,,,one day
it'll come back again
remove your pain
kiss you goodnight
and then drive you insane
coz ,,,it's gone missing again
one day of love
two days of lovemaking
three days of waiting
four days lonely
four days lonely
writing letters, never gonna post them
crying my eyes out, cannot even stop them
four days lonely
four days lonely
and soon it'll be tomorrow
and i'll be starting over
four days lonely
four days lonely
woke up this morning
sunlight shining through my window
laid another hour in bed,thinking
of what to do today
how to begin my day
and how will it end?
will i survive the loneliness
and find happiness
being by myself
or will i sit and cry over you
tell myself to die for you
pray for you
to come back to me
and share your love.
one day of love
two days of lovemaking
three days of waiting
four days lonely....
spent dreams on my pillow
crying like a weeping willow
leaving the bed soaking
dripping wet
from nights with you, on my mind
from nights with you, on my mind
soaking,dripping wet
from nights with you, on my mind
on my mind
i'm a castaway on a deserted island
and there's no one else around
but the sea and the breeze
one day i found your footsteps
and i traced them to your cabin
i found it empty
and i go in
and wait
in your bed,
like Goldilocks,sleeping
waiting for the three bears
soon,you found me sleeping
and lay beside me
kissed me softly
upon my cheek
i awoke
and we made the bed creak
forget about
one day of love
two days of lovemaking
forget about waiting three days
i want four days of lonely
lifted from me,by you
so love me,like there's no tomorrow
make me cry when it's almost over
play with me undercover
love me like there's no tomorrow
make me beg
for your power
over and over and over again
let me, let me, let me
have.. another
four days lonely
(repeat and fade)
Soon they'll both be lonely.It's friday night.Two night before sunday
morning comes and takes Veronica away,leaving Duawee by himself again,in a
house,lonely again.tonight..tonight they have to feed the fire burning
within them.They look at each other and it becomes real,that urgent feeling
to satisfy,a growth of lust pushing its way to their eyes and supression
became a biting of tongue and silly grins..~tonight..they must.~
They continue dancing until a tap on Duawee's shoulder made Veronica's eyes
squint and an evil thought enters her mind.It's Wendy.Duawee turns around
and smiles.Wendy looks at Veronica and asks -CAN I CUT IN? Veronica thinks
about the question and thinks about the question and thinks about the
question.NOOOOOO.I'm sorry,but this is our song and no one dances this like
us..
A reggae song;
Dennis Brown singing- HOW COULD I LEAVE?
(*if any of you have this song,please take it out and play it now*)
the dub version follows..a NINEY THE OBSERVER mix..the crash of drums
--reverb..base line-wicked.. echoing sound.
Duawee closes his eyes,squeezes Veronica around the waist and enters the
TWELVE CHAMBER OF RUB-UH-DUB.He moves his body around the bass lines..rising
up and down at the cresending sound,hardly moving. Veronica learns
quickly.Her arms are folded around his shoulders,her fingers rubbing his
neck.The love flowing through their bodies cries out for forgiveness.They
hold each other soclose no one else can enter.Wendy walks away feeling
stupid for interrupting and not being satisfied from her own taunt.Veronica
sees her walking away and a wry smile shows on her face.Her heart satisfied
.Another song.
~No Wendy.Duawee is mine~.Her head is leaning on his chest.Another finger
finds its way underneath his shirt and up his back PLAYING. Rubbing a turn
on.His body inches.She pinches.Two small earthquakes explode and their
bodies quiver.A kiss reaches up and smacks his face with warmth.A stronger
kiss holds them still..a beating heart.A non-movement of body with feelings
running through without stopping.The feelings begin behind the knees and
travel all over the body,jerking them in and out,until finally resting near
the pit of stomach.
She is ready to leave.Ready to swim across the darken water,with the long
shadows from the silvery moon.
She is ready to find the nearest exit and leave.She's ready to stop
time,stop the world, make everyone and everything stand still.
She is ready for him.
He is....he is ready too.
He's been ready a long time.
He is ready to hold her right there on the dance floor,even in the midst of
prying eyes,and love her.
He is ready to kiss all over her body...ready to lay her down on the
floor,watch her beautiful,brown body snake away from him and then grab her
by hand and steady her.
He is ready to breath life into her.
He is ready to fulfill the overdue.
He wants her and is ready.
she want him and she is ready for/with him.
when the time Comes,WILL YOU BE READY?
Wendy plots her next move in her head.
**Not today nor tomorrow,but soon.I need love too.Dancing with friends and
strangers is no substitute for what Duawee has.No way.I'll get him back at
all cost.I'll just let time run its course. Let's see who is the lover of
all lovers.I'll make move in my own time**
LET'S LEAVE THE HABOUR MASTER AGAIN AND CHECK OUT THE BAJAN QUEEN.
Song pumping:
VOLCANO by Red Plastic Bag
ash in de air
ash in de air
it's smoking
smoking.
The crowd is going wild,throwing their hands in the air and shouting.
SIERRA AND ROMNEO
Sierra; I'm so glad I came on this trip with you.
Romneo: I'm happy because you are happy..look at the way they are dancing
down here in the islands..wow..my dogs would be out here barking if they
came on this trip.
Sierra; yup my girls betta watch out when the Caribbean girls are about.
Romneo: So what have you enjoyed so far?
Sierra; There all a lot of things i've enjoyed..the walks on the
beaches...mornings and evenings..especially the evenings..those sunsets
make me feel so good..it's so romantic..what about you? what one thing have
you enjoyed so far?
Romneo looks away from her and towards the dance floor.His answer falls
from his lips.
Romneo;YOU.
Sierra,slightly embarrass,tries to find an escape.
Sierra;what do you mean?
Romneo: well don't you know what your heart is telling you.I care for you a
whole lot.I would do anything for you..to that end,the most enjoyable part
of this holiday has been YOU.
Sierra; I've enjoyed your company too and I,too, have a fondness for you.
Romneo; Sierra I don't think you're hearing what I'm saying.
Sierra; What are you saying?
Romneo; I'm saying I want to make love to you..yes make love to you..
tonight. I don't know where this urge came from,but last night while I was
reading,I just happened to look over at you,sleeping.The sheet had fallen
away from your shoulders and there you were..lying there. I wanted you so
bad, wanted you there and then.I had to put the book down and try to
sleep.You kept entering my head and eventually my dream.
Sierra; I'm..I'm so embarass..I ..I.. '''let's dance..come on let's
dance..
They reach the floor,hold onto each other and drift into love.a slow jam.
They whisper to each other
Sierra: I want you too...
Romneo: well we'll have to wait until the party is over,when we return to
the our room ..we'll we'll find out what love is made of.
Sierra: scchhhh...don't say another word..let's just do it.Where do you want
to begin?
Romneo; what do you mean?
Sierra; we could find a safer place on this boat and...
He walks her off the floor,her words uttering like the sound of a beating
heart.On the upper deck couples are locked in embrace,no longer wanting to
dance,but longing for romance.
Sierra and Romeneo find their dark,secret spot amoungst the other lovers and
set-a-fire.
Motion.boat motion
upon the ocean
heaving to and fro
rocking side to side
on a boat ride
music.soca dress
short,wet and ready
lift up
reveals nothing
eyes blush
rush
secret touch
want so much
to hole(hold) you
wait...
"tis but a taste
for later
when you and I
be ready for each other
just one touch
of thses lips
will let me know
how u flow
say you love me
say it again
and again
till I stop you
now get up off
your knees
say please
and I'll let you know when
I'm ready for you again.
Sierra and Romneo hurry off to the floor.He has a slight limp..he bought a
dog and pulled a muscle.Sierra is unsteady on her feet..a little nervous,but
ready.dance till dawn.
Maggie
Maggie,lonely Maggie
all alone in a corner
waiting to be asked
for a dance
too much beauty
for one woman
to have and not share
men become afraid to ask
they think you have issues
and a man/husband.
Maggie a little flirt
will start the ball rolling
go on Maggie
go to him
that man is waiting for you
he looks nervous
but so do you
you make your move
because he wouldn't
he's afraid
of you saying no.
go on Maggie
tell him
you wouldn't bite him
unless he refuses you
tell him you are bajan
but have lived too long
in a foriegn land
tell him
you speak the bajan language fluently
and he must not be afraid of you
go Maggie.. go
tell him he's looks good
ask him for a dance
startle him
then make him submit
by squeezing his fingers.
go on Maggie
pull him to the dance floor
then hold him close
watch his eyes
as they blink
while you show him
why your dancing is so dangerous
go Maggie
go with him
to the top deck
and whisper to him
your loneliness
and your longing for an arm
and the safety
of a man
not now
but later
tell him he looks good
and wait for him to return
the compliment.
go on Maggie
tell him
how much you want him
to take you to dinner
and become your walking keep-fit companion
on 5:30am mornings
tell him it's only for seven more days
tell him he can refuse
but if he does
tell him
he loses
you.
tell him Maggie
that you will wait for his call
tell him
he must call
because your heart needs mending
and it's been a long time
since you loved
and you came home for the remedy
and you see it in him
and before he answers
tell him
your name is Maggie
and he mustn't say another word
he must finish whatever he's thinking
and he must come with you
when the boat ride is over
tell him how to get to your hotel room
but he mustn't come in after the kiss goodnight
he mustn't
he mustn't,unless
he's very polite
and even then you being a lady
might refuse to let him in
tell him Maggie
that you'd love
to see him again
not tonight though
tell him you want to dream of him alone
and that if he stayed you would not responsible
for what might happen to him.
tell him Maggie
how you feel about him
tell him about loneliness
in the foreign land
and how long it took for you to reach him
and since it took so long
you want him as a souvenir
but if he refuse
you would be disappointed in him
but would kidnap him anyway
tell him Maggie
tell him what you want to do to him
then watch his eyes droop into his glass
and swallow his drink fast
tell him Maggie
how on sundays
you'll make sure he's comfortable
and will bring him breakfast
for both of you
and how he wouldn't have to mow the lawn
because you paid someone to do it
tell him how you know his back hurts
and you know the art
of rubbing away pain
in heated oils.
tell him Maggie
how you feel
he'll like the words
you use
he will like your body movements
he will like you even more
when you dance with him
and discover your laughter
is so intriguing and sexy
go Maggie
go over there
and tell him
don't beg him
because that's not you way
ask him if he'll dance with you
go on Maggie
get off the stool
dust off your skirt
walk the walk
which you have perfected
you know THE WALK
the walk which lets everyone knows you have arrive
you know the walk which make time stand still
walk that walk
the walk which moves in slow motion
the walk which make other women envious
the walk that make men's eyes travel with every action
the walk which caused accidents and traffic jams
the walk.Maggie.THAT WALK.
HE.
nervously
looks away
be bold Maggie
grab his hands
and play with his fingers
this is the 90's
so a woman can be forceful
a woman can play
Finger Fun
Maggie laugh at the moment his jaws drops and his eyes starts blinking.
he smiles
his heart beats faster
than a soca drum beat
no words
exchanged
between
eyes meet and signal DANCE
the song
FIRE IN DE SOCA..by Nathalee.
Maggie and her new friend make great music with their bodies.He's a drum.
She's a well tune guitar.Listen to the sound they make.
I've been watching you all night
I know,I've been watching you too
where are you from?
Barbados ...where are you from?
Barbados
(together) hahaha ..
what's happen to our accents
we've been too long in america
we need to come home more often
get away from the rat race
need to be amongst my people
need to feel the sun and the breeze
on our faces and on our backs
we need to relax
and enjoy our childhood memories
Mag: how long will you be here on holiday?
It depends on where this dance take us
Mag: haha..it might get you thrown overboard
I can swim an ocean for you.
Mag; ok...then let's go swimming tomorrow
ok,what time can I pick you up?
Mag; about 9'30 am
are you staying with family?
Mag; no.I'm visiting my family.I'm staying at LUS-COVE Beach Hotel and
Bar.
give me the directions later...hey now i know why they call this
paradise.
mag; why?
paradise means a place of beauty,bliss or delight.. heaven..
Mag; and?
well I've only known you ..let's say eighteen minutes,but already your
beauty has me wondering what heaven's like,since you be the angel who have
rescued me.
Mag; you say that to all the girls
I may have once,but I didn't mean it..I mean it now...you are
absolutely astonding...the way you walk, the way you dance.. the way you
laugh makes me wonder what will happen when we kiss.
Mag; hahaha...you make me laugh..I don't kiss on a first date.
neither do I..not unless I can't help myself
Mag: down boy you need a leash
ARRGHHHHS.. ruuuggghh
Mag ;what type of dog are you? a pit bull or a german shepherd?
dog? let's see I'm an house dog
Mag; explain
I'm playful yet deadly
Mag; deadly? what can a house dog do?
I'll can show you later.
Mag: you're being rude.
maybe so.it all depends on how you view my words.
Mag: oh I see,your words have double meanings,like what calysonians do with
calypso.double entendre..very good..
yes
Mag: do you do everything in doubles?
yes..I believe that when one does something good..one should do it
again..I believe in perfection.
Mag; I like you even though you are rude
no,not rude,just playful
(together)
haha..hehe haha...
another song:
NOT ME..by Rupee
They dance --dance --dance.They have fallen in love with their homeland.the
music,the food,the culture,but most of all the PEOPLE..THE BAJAN PEOPLE.
On the top deck the party is in full flight.It's here where we meet the real
WUKUPOLOGISTS .in one corner we have the men winers like LIL RICK,TALL
BOY,RICO,MARCEL MONTANA,SOCA SURFER,DE DEVIL(calypsonian)YOUNG
BLOOD...etc..etc. in de other corner we have the women winers like ALISON
HINDS,NATHALEE,GLESKE AND THE DC POSSE,PEACHES,KAT NICOLE,BAJANGAL,MISSJOY,N
SPICE,TWO TONS UH FUNN,etc..etc.
The men are outnumbered,but they have LIL RICK,TALL BOY AND MARCEL MONTANA
to help even things up.
First song;
winning war by MADD
(song from 1999 cropover)
on de floor there's a wining war.
""""""""""""""""""""""""""""'"''
:::::
Alison and Marcel take to the floor.bajan gal.trini man.a wining war.
song;togetherness by SQUARE ONE
POSSE,,,raise your hands and keep them in de air
~~~~~` raise your hands and keep them in de air
togetherness.
""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""
WRITER'S NOTE____ I'VE HAD TO EDIT THIS PART OUT..IT WAS TOO LONG...ANYWAY
THE WOMEN WON THE WINING WAR,SO WE MEN HAVE TIO WHEEL AND COME AGAIN.
At 4am the boats pulled up near the shore and the passengers
disembarked.some are drunk..some are feeling tipsy,some are catspraddle(real
drunk) and blind drunk..in other words dem real lickup(DRUNK).
On the Bajan Queen a song is blaring.it's Mac Fingal's CHANGE YUH SOCA
MAN.The party people are wuking up and singing.
On the Habour Master another song blares from the speakers.it's Alison
Hind's and Square One's JACK UP DE WORLD.
Soon car horns, blue smoke and screeching car tyres leave the scene
empty.Streams of moonlight soak the night,leaving long trails on the dark
water,the boats bouncing to the soca rush of a calming sea.The lights from
the boat are dimmed and the surroundings return to peace.
Homeward..sleep.
Duawee and Veronica are locked in embrace,while the car bounces along the
bumpy road,her head leaning on his shoulder.Her right hand has penertrated
his unbutton shirt,fingers playing on his Xylophone of a body.He smiles from
a tickle.she smiles with happiness (*).
Leslie is fast asleep and dreaming.the tickling/kissing continues in the
front seat.torrid heat buiLDS.The hotel room is dark as Leslie enters,her
sleepy eyes finds the bed and her body splashes down into a *ahhhh
sound.sleep.
The car's engine purrs as the occupants fall deeper and deeper into a
seductive state.He can hardly control the car.His body twitches as wet
kisses touches his ear lobe.SERIOUS.The car purrs like a kitten,the
occupants purr within themselves..love busting out all over.A caress,full of
intent,squeezes his body closer to hers and it builds desire..uncontrollable
desire.the car suddenly brakes>>>>.stop:.
headlights stretches long beams along the street,filling part of the void.
He kisses her and she moans..a long moan escapes from within as she reaches
around his waist for a stronger hold.His hands leaves the steering wheel and
finds her waiting for him//that touch.. warmth .she groans ..heaving her
body upwards...it was time..the place
it was right.
;!
(to be continued)
DennisY.
(W)__if anyone would like to apppear in the next episode,please e-mail
me,stating the type of car you would like to drive at BUSHY
PARK(racecourse),also your nick name__
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