BARBADOS I WANNA STAY
A story by DENNIS YOUNG
The moon bares witness to the night,throwing light on its subjects like a
Queen sitting on a throne.Bright lights splits the darkness making the curve
of road more foreboding,more suspenseful.Eerie feelings reaches into the
moment and selects control.
It's not the right place.
A car waits in the dark.
whispers and nodding heads.
"Let's go home"
The clock reads 3:18am and clips to 3:19am,as the car drives away.
silence.
HOME
The dark room welcomes them as the door creaks open.
"No lights please"
The bathroom light spreads itself throughout the room,until the door closes
and keeps its life hidden.A small crack of light hangs underneath the
door,waiting to refill the room.
Exhaustion calapse unto the bed with great sighs of tiredness.Within two
minutes sleep enters and small breaths escape into the darken room.The
bathroom light goes off and a shadow crosses the room.A foot stumbles into a
chair.A voice gives a small-ughh --sssh.
Small echoes of breath piercing the room,brings a sudden disappointment to
the shadow.Lying on the bed,cursing into the night,finally succumbing to
sleep.Two hearts become one.
**
Saturday morning.Fresh air.Kisses and hugs.Phone rings.
A brisk morning jog.Three miles of laughter and smiles.Pinch bottoms.
An old man wearing a craggy face smiles:
"good morning sir..madam"
"Good morning Mr Jackson.How are you?"
"Good morning I'm good "
A tip of the hat shows Mr Jackson's well being,his smile broadening on
seeing the woman's smile.The walk takes them along a small broken road.Mud
and small pebbles slows them down to a more normal pace.A few hugs and
kisses reduces the walk to crawl.Cows are in a pasture grazing.A sheep
stands a safe distance from the larger animals,his head rising with curosity
etched on his face.He notices the two people walking along the road then
bows his head,ripping the green grass from the ground and chewing his hunger
away.Little birds fly from tree to tree.
Holding hands and occasionally, pinching each other bottoms,they
laugh,heartily,into the morning air.
Saturday morning.One more day before Veronica departs from her paradise and
her man.How will she spend her last day?
Veronica; D,where are we going today? The beach would be nice,remember we
need to settle that argument on who is the faster swimmer?
Duawee: hahahha...yes I remember,but I thought it would be nice for you to
take in another side of Barbados.we're going to watch car racing at Bushy
Park.Nearly half the island will be there and you'll meet some friends of
mine.
Veronica: I've never been to the races.I'll love to go.What time will we be
leaving?
Duawee: We'll get back home in the next fifteen minutes,which would make it
7:05am,then we'll put a picnic basket together and we'll be on our way.
Veronica: Let's go...catch me.
She runs away from him,her body shape catching him in mid-sentence. He looks
at her for a spilt second and wonders aloud to himself.
"darn...I'm a lucky man"
He catches and holds her close for one of those "love you so bad kisses".She
clips her lips unto his and falls into his arms.
The sweetness and joy of the morning lends itself to the breath of birds.So
much love wasting a morning.
Veronica wonders: ~when will the time be right to feel the love Wendy
tasted?. I love him so much,but it seems we'll never get to make love. maybe
this is just a dream and soon i'll be back to reality,in America.~
Her sigh draws the kiss away from his lips and they walk back to the
house,greeting men and women of the village.The morning sun bears down on
the road.
"Good morning Mr Maynard..is that yuh new girlfriend? she's so pretty.When
yuh getting married?"
An old woman rants her questions,which brings much laughter from the morning
crowd.A bus arrives full of passengers and departs.It's engine choaking
under weight of a heavier load,belching and coughing as it speeds towards
its destination.Some of the early passengers are serious and have not got a
"good morning" in their mouths.Some of the men nod at Duawee and smile with
Veronica.The women stare.Soon the black/grey smoke is out of sight.The road
returns to quiet.
Veronica; D.. tell me about your parents? you've never told me about your
mother.what was she like?
Duawee: Let's talk at home ok.
Veronica: ok...ok baby.
More greeting from passerbys.Nodding heads and wide smiles.
BARBADOS== 166 ROUND SMILES
Veronica runs to the bathroom,showers,changes into a light dress,then runs
into the kitchen.BREAKFAST.Duawee takes his time in the shower,his mind
pasting back and forth.He feels a hurt enter him and turns off the
water-flow.In the mirror,his eyes,a redness forming. He puts on a pair of
shorts and a blue t-shirt.
Two eggs,two strips of bacon,toast and an assortment of fruits greet him on
the breakfast table.Veronica arrives with her plate in hand.One egg,toast
and fruits,but no bacon.
TYPHOO TEA...the breakfast drink comes in small cups attach to saucers.
A small prayer to God,then time to eat.
sipping tea...eating eggs,toast and fruits...and conversation
Duawee; There..over there on the wall,that's my mother and my father is on
the left.
The pictures are old like they were taken in the 1940's.They had a bland
look of colour.The woman's face bore a soft smile.On her head a hat showed
she'd had a fashion style.Her eyes lit up from the faded picture and made
Veronica wished she had met her.
She rises from her chair to inspect the pictures more closely. Earings hangs
from the side of her head,casting more impressions of her happiness.She
looks wonderful.As Veronica turns away the woman's eyes follow her around
the room.
The man wears a stingy-bim hat,the ones the English made famous way back in
the 1930's -40's.His smile is thin and face much more serious.
His eyes seems full of sadness,like the grey suit he wore.A contrast of two
people.Another picture hangs on the wall to the left of those pictures.It
told a family story.A much younger looking picture with
a woman and a man standing in front of an artificial tree,in a studio In
between them stands a boy,in short pants,holding their hands and smiling.He
looks like his mother,but has his father's nose.Veronica runs her hands
across the picture,then breaks into a laugh.Another picture brings a puzzle
look to her face.It's a white woman,dressed in strange clothes.A crown on
head.
Duawee; Oh...that's a picture of the Queen's mother.Queen Elizabeth.
that's her mother.She's still living today.my mother loved her.
Veronica; Oh.
She walks back to the table and resumes eating her fruits.
Duawee;My father and my mother.What does these pictures tell you?
Veronica: well your mother seemed like a very nice person,brings a feeling
of warmth.Your father seemed much more serious,a little sadness in his
face.I love your picture.shorts pants(laughs).You were real cute.
Duawee; cute...huh? is that all?
She pulls her chair closer to him,kisses him on the cheek and throws her
hands around his shoulders.
Duawee; My father wasn't always serious,but I think he held his bitterness
inside.He loved his country,but didn't like what the politicians were doing
to it.The rich were always heard,but the poor were silenced.A proud
man,quiet and hardworking.I love him and his jokes.We would go swimming on
cold mornings and wrestle when Mummy was out of the house.We had fun.He
loved Cricket and talked about his heros all the time.He was a true West
Indies fan.He would bring his cricket arguments home and Mummy would argue
back.She would make a point,then look at me for support.I would agree with
her.Daddy knew we were only teasing him and would let the argument end with
a hug from me and a kiss from Mummy.Life in our house was that way.Built on
LOVE.... My mother was the sweetest,kindest person you'd ever meet. she was
gentle and kind.She would give away her last dollar to a more needy
person.when I was wicked and she was chartising me,she would lecture and
then administer the belt.We would talk for hours after that.i loved her so
much.
A sadness creeps into his voice and he goes silent.Veronica finds his face
etched in pain,tears rolling down his cheeks.A small drop of water hangs on
his nose and falls freely to its end.A splash of water speads through his
shirt.A tissue wipes his face and he contines.
Duawee;..ssnnnccch. ssnncchh(sniffing).Father died and the house became
lonely.Studying kept me busy.Eventually I graduated and got a scholarship to
study in England.Six years I spent,until my mother called me home.A deadly
sickness was running all through her body.She ached.I returned and found her
happiness,arms outstretched from the bed,her kiss trembling.Her words
finding my name and breaking it up.
Duawee recalls her words the day he arrived from England.
"DU..A.WEE I miss you,come hug your Momma.How was England? Was it too cold
for you? Did you wrap up warm? Do you have a girlfriend yet? Duawwee yuh
mother's going home soon,to see Daddy."
Duawee: I found a job and got someone to take care of her.She lived for two
years,with that dreaded pain.i'd kissed her that morning and she recalled
one of my childhood stories.Her words crimpled between coughing and
laugther.I knew the end was near,but they was nothing we could do.God would
make the decision. During the day I ate nothing.I was hungry,but my soul was
filling up with God's spirit and I prayed and prayed for Mummy all day.I
prayed that the pain would go,leave her happy.The phone rang and I knew it
was over.I knew it was over,because when someone you love so much,leaves
you,they take part of you with them.I drove home and found her lying there.A
smile.A face.A silence.A time.A meaningful expression of what God had
created.I found real love.I laid next to her,her hands in mine.She slept and
I slept.
The day of the funeral I didn't cry,couldn't cry.I kept remembering Mummy
and Daddy and how they had loved each other for so long and I too,wanted to
love like they did.People came and paid their respects and the priest told
part of her life.I told the rest.I read a poem.
Can I read it to you?
He rises from the chair,walks towards the bedroom,shuffle through some boxes
and re-emerges with a piece of paper in hand.
Duawee; I read this poem.It's called MOTHER.
A friend
was my Mother.
I knew no other.
so gentle with kiss
so generous with love
she was my Mother
too kind to keep as my own
Momma dear
so much love to share.
Momma
I love you
Momma
I'll miss you
so much.
When the day comes with suddeness
and fills blue skies with grey
remember this
there's no greater love
but God's
and the way you find it
is through our parents
Momma
I love you
Momma
I'll miss you
so much.
Hollow days and nights
will come and bring me tears
but I'll be strong
I have good friends
like Brian and Wendy.
I have the bible
and my memories
I'll be strong.
Momma
I love you
Momma
I'll miss you
so much
Goodnight momma
you have found your peace
in God's arms.
I'll cherish your love
with every breath i take
I'll smile
after every heartbreak
and I'll love you always.
'night momma.
________________--____________________
AT the end of the poem,tears hang like exclamation marks on paper, then flow
freely,leaving smudges of blue ink and sad faces.
Veronica: That was a nice poem.
Duawee:Thanks.
With her head resting on his shoulders..the morning becomes silent.A rush of
wind blows through the trees,a few leaves fall to the ground, where insects
gather.It's a bright,sunny morning.Birds are chirping with happiness.Dogs
and cats play in the fields and little boys with kites,laugh withn each
other,while little girls skip rope. It's Saturday,a quiet day.One needs not
rush,unless the bus is coming to take one to town,to shop,till one drops.The
journey to the wide walls of Bridgetown is full of fun.Large women with
large baskets enter the bus and become issuers of jokes,their accents broad
and raw.Real bajan we call it.A few curse words and stern warning from the
bus driver brings out the "bajanness" of the morning.SATURDAY.People get on
and off the bus.on and off..on and on and on and on until it becomes a
squeeze-
sque-eze.
squee-ze.
squeez-e.
squeeze.
Bridgetown arrives and there is an exhale of air.aahhhhhh.The bus belches
its load onto the tarmac.Its belly empty until another hour comes and the
Driver signals the Conductor and people rush the bus and the policeman tries
to keep a noisy crowd under control and they curse him under breath,because
a policeman is the law of the land and must be respected at all times.He's
the one with the billy club.He's the one who could drag you to the police
station.He's the one who can charge you with "disorderly conduct"--"conduct
unbecoming".He's the one who demands respect.A policeman puts his life on
the line,so people can have a good time.
POLICE AND THIEVES
IN THE STREETS
FIGHTING THE SYSTEM
WITH GUNS AND AMMUNITION.
Broad street welcomes.The walk over the bridge is short and dodgy. Smell of
dirty water runs up nostrils,but is quickly ignored.The traffic of
pedestrians brush each other and "excuse me" calms the sidewalk rage.Little
children walk hand in hand with their mothers. A nut seller greets the
morning with her town cry.
" NUTS...CONFEITS...TOFFEES...WHU YUH WANT YOUNG FELLA"
"YOUNG MAN TEK YUH HAND OUT MUH TRAY"
Saturday morning in Bridgetown Barbados.Hear the sound of cars with horns
belching out their warnings and greetings.Girls in short dresses make the
day so much brighter.Men with muscles show off their bodies-armless
vests.Fat men pull their pants up to a wide girth,a belt pleads for some
constraint.Shirts stretch to the limit.To the max of the XXXXL design.Fat
women balance their hips and smoothly runs the gauntlet of the busy
streets.Boys and men stare at the women walking along the
streets._short.tall.fat.slim.ugly.goodlooking. beautiful.bugly.fit.unfit.The
sidewalk is engulf with women.Women from all parts of life.Life in
Barbados.Tourist women add to the multi-cultural diversity of the sidewalk
jam.
Store owners,in white shirts,greet customers with broad smiles.The stores'
coldness comes from the blast of the aircondition unit. Shiver and
shop.Moving between the t-shirts and sundresses,a tourist flips her credit
card between her fingers.A sales woman approaches and helps her pick out
three sundresses and five t-shirts.Commission made with a friendly thank
you.Sunglasses covering eyes darkens the day,as the woman re-enters the
street.
MANGOES..PINEAPPLES..ORANGES..ENGLISH APPLES..MINTS..POPCORN..NUTS..
The tray is full of colour attracting little children to the many delights.
" Mummy uh want a mango and popcorn'
"How much are the popcorns"
"uh dollar and twenty five cents"
"uh dollar and twenty five cents,uh don't want de whole tray.dese things
get real expensive"
"blame the government.dem put on their taxes and mash muh toe,so uh gotta
mek uh living.uh had to put up muh prices."
"yuh right.it en you.all de foreigners come bout here meking nuff dollars
and don't cay bout the island.dem just blindfold de ministers and rob we
blind.we need leadership in this country.we need a leader who gine sit
down,tek uh look at what's going on and do the right thing for the people.we
need a strong leader."
"we got a strong leader,but some uh he underlings don't give one Iota bout
this land.dem just wann build houses in Fort St.George and watch de
satellite dish bring in foriegn programs.yuh know it?"
"true dat"
"anyway missus have a good day,yuh got a handsome boy deh.whu he name?
"NIVEN"
"cute..cute just like he face..see yuh dearie...bye bye"
"yes uh gine see yuh next week..tek care...Niven tell de woman tanks"
"thanks mam"
"toffees...nuts..mangoes.."
Her shouting trail off with the warbling sound of perdestrian shoes.
The little boy's happiness is eating a sweetie and holding his mango.
shopping... hot...weather..perspiration..handkerchief..
"cheeeese on bread it hot".
air condition..cold..too cold.
Mr Thandani,an Indian,newly arrived from Trinidad has set up shop and is
doing quite well.He has given employment to eight bajans; six girls and two
boys.His accountant is Trinidadian and his sales Manager is St.Lucian.
The sign displays the name of the store as-THANDANI AND SONS.He has two sons
are in high school and a daughter in University.Everyday his wife spoke to
him by phone,just to say "i love you" in Hindu.She is a devoted wife whose
love was distributed equally amoungst the family. Not one person got more
affection then the other..no extra love,no jealousy.
Nike shoes and brand name clothes;the youth came in and bought the latest
street wear and he took the money home,counted it and gave five percent back
to his community.Last night he had sat with his wife and discussed the
planning of a street fair.He would pay for everything.He loved his second
home_BARBADOS and this would show some of his appreciation.
Saturday.It's another good day.Last minute rush for clothes and shoes.Money
flows into the till and soon quiet returns to the store.The girls gossip and
the boys are hatching a plan.They want to to go Bushy Park,but they cannot
all leave at once,so they plan and plan.The girls are talking about 'WUTLESS
boyfriends' who can't stay faithful.
Mr Thandani comes out of the back office.They hurry to look busy.
Mr Thandani(in a Trinidadian accent); All wunna know Bushy Park racing today
and en tell me..schruups(sucking teeth)..and muh boys come over from T & T
to lick de crowd into a frenzy.Uh gotta go and see muh boys..soca in de
bajans tail.Let's close in twenty minutes.
A sigh of relief.
MR Thandani: Before all yuh rush outta here,i've bonuses here in these
envelops.we did well the past four days,so here's your rewards.
He hands envelops to the girls and then to the boys.They eagerly open them
to discover bonus paid in cash.NUFF GRANTLEYS(money).The girls rush over and
hug their boss.The boys walk over and clips folded fists and beat their
chest.He returns the gesture and leaves.
Time 11:15am. store closes after two hours and forty five minutes.
home..
bye
bye
see you later
Bushy Park then
whu you wearing?
i'll be wearing CARGO wear
i'm wearing FUBU
ok.
LATER
PEACE
Mr Thandani
bye
yeah
They walk towards the bus terminal,but two girls never complete the
journey.Men in big cars pick them up and grey smoke speeds off with tinted
windows.Mr Thandani's Mercedes is waiting.He turns the engine on.A silent
sound from the engine-purrrrrr.Lights on the dashboard resembles the cockpit
of an aeroplane.He clips a button and soca trumpets from the speakers.Lovely
sound.A trini-bajan mix.
leaving Bridgetown.
The bus is full to capacity.10:55am.Stop and go through the busy streets.A
few cuss words and laughter.The counrtyside opens to a vast array of
colour.Cane fields like backdrops of some idlylic painting,hangs in one's
mind.Like a poster showing pride and industry.
Picturesque: pleasing to the eyes.A scene abounding with vivid imagery. This
land.This caribbean land.This Barbados.
In the distance the blue sky meets the land with snow-like clouds hovering
overhead.A small plane buzzes through the air.Temperature reaches 92 degrees
and perspiration flows.HOTTT.
No air conditioners in the bus.Old ladies fan themselves and whisper.
Women and girls used their hands to fan themselves cool.temperature 94
degrees and rising.
The passengers disembark and the bus is soon empty.It returns from whence it
came.BRIDGETOWN.
11:30am
a phone rings
brrrrnggg
brrrrngg
brrrrngg
Voice: hello it's Leslie
Veronica: hi how are you? we were just talking about calling you.what are
you doing today?
Leslie : nothing..I went down to the beach,had breakfast,now I'm bored.
Veronica: We can come and pick you up..we're going to a car racing event.we
could pick you up at about twelve noon.will you be ready?
Leslie: course..Duawee wouldn't mind me coming?
Veronica: NO ..In fact he's been saying some nice things about you.I may
have to watch you girl.hahaha
Leslie: haha.. yeah coz he's fine..I want a man like that..gentle and
sincere and so darn looking at that.you're one lucky woman.I wish I had met
him first.
Veronica: They'll someone out there for you.You'll see.
Leslie: I'll finish pack my suitcases,so that tomorrow wouldn't catch me
unprepared.I hate to leave,but everything must end.
Veronica: Well girl, I'm going to make the most out of today.It's my last
day and I'm going to enjoy myself.I'm not going to let anything upset me.
Leslie; you're right...we'll talk soon...by the way Veronica thanks for
being my friend
Veronica: OK.I thank you too. BYE
BYE..
(click)
Veronica: That was Leslie.She wants to come to the car racing event.
Duawee; My girl!!course she can come along.she can add to the scenery.
Heeee hehee
Veronica: you just want to be seen with two women.
Duawee: That's right.Two lovely women.I'll make the men envious.Hahhaa.hey
baby I'm just joking.you are mine alone.
Veronica reaches his lips and kiss them.Duawee closes the door and lock
it.The car is laden down with food and drinks.Ten minutes later they see her
on the balconey.They wave.She runs into the room, grabs a bag and runs
towards the car.Duawee feels a kiss on his cheeks,smiles and turns the
engine on.
BUSHY PARK.
CARS...CARS..AND MORE CARS.
A long line of people moving slowly through the gate.
entry fee: $15.00,includes a free t-shirt and cap.
The t-shirt shows a picture of a car and photos of three drivers,who have
pass on.They are:
ANDREW PHILLIPS_VAUXHALL VENTURA
MIKEY HUTCHINSON_ MINI COOPER S
ANDREA DOTTIN_ HILLMAN IMP
Words on the cap calls for unity between whites and blacks,declaring the
day_ BUSHY PARK REVIVAL DAY.A day we rediscover the past and ourselves.
The smell of engine oil,mobile.
the noisy crowd
the laughter
picnic baskets
nut sellers
sno-cone vendors
black umbrellas(why?)
some people wearing afro wigs
1970's clothes
men wearing silk pajamas
men wid big enamel bowls full of rum punch
women with large afros and bell bottom trousers
women in short mini skirts
1970's music blares from the speakers
a New York band_THE ODD 4 are on stage
RICKY CUMBERBATCH is on percussion
DUDLEY BURKE on lead
BAJANSOONER on guitar
other members are funking up the place
The song_JAMES BROWN'S---I'VE GOT A BAG OF MY OWN
men and women in the crowd are dancing
--dance;
THE BUMP
THE PENQUIN
THE JACKIE OPEL SHUFFLE
THE VEHICLE
RAF-OUSE
THE GOOD FOOT
ANTS IN MY PANTS
THE RUBBERBAND
THE STRONGMAN
THE SPILT
THE HOP UP(spouge)
THE HUSTLE
THE SLIDE
(etc)
The afro-wearing crowd are having a great time,showing the youth how it used
to be.Fun without the violence.Live And Let Live.
The Announcer:
WELCOME TO BUSHY PARK.we'll be going back in time
people.Remember the old days when half of Barbados would be here and the fun
we used to have.Well we hope to bring all that fun back,but before we begin
I would like all of us to bow our heads in prayer.
PRAYER:
Heavenly Father we thank thee for another day.Help us to
understand and appreciate your works.Bless this little country of ours and
our brothers and sisters in the rest of the Caribbean.we pray for the less
fortunate,the poor,the afflicted,the homeless and all oppressed people of
the world.We pray for an end to the violence which is plauging our
nation.Rid this land of the drugs.Send love to everyone.Let the youth know
we haven't forgotten them.Let them see the light.Let reconcilliation
reign.We begin and end in your name dear Father.Amen
silence
(one minute)
Announcer: People get ready.please choose your favopurite driver and root
for him or her.We're going to have a good time.As you know this day is also
dedicated to the lives of ANDREW PHILLIPS,MIKEY HUTCHINSON AND ANDREA
DOTTIN...To all the youths who don't remember who they were,look at the
screens,we'll be showing a short profile-film.
Four giant screens _
sound of screeching tyres(tires)
picture of Andrew Phillips
more screeching tyres
Vauxhall Ventura
Ford Escort (Bullit)
"Brugga Johnson"
red light
one
two
three
green light
The Ford Escort pulls away from the starting grid,the crowd roars.The
Vauxhall Ventura is seconds behind.Other cars are eating dust.Down to the
'Hammer Bend' the Escort is first,followed closely by the Ventura.To the
next bend,bumpers touch.The crowd are in a frenzy.It's onto the 'Hairpin
bend',Escort still in front,but here comes the Ventura with ANDREW
PHILLIPS,he is gaining on BRUGGA JOHNSON and the Escort.The large wheels of
the Ventura hugs the curve,wait ..here is why we love this man...the ventura
is on two wheels..the crowd is jumping and shouting.
ANDREW..ANDREW...ANDREW.
Down the home stretch and the cars are locked neck and neck.To the hairpin
bend and the Escort regains the lead,around the corners the battle is
on.They exchange positions during the laps.On the fifth and final lap,the
Ventura regains the lead and this is where Andrew gives the crowd his
signature move--on two wheels the car hugs every corner and the crowd is
with him.The escort is right behind.They reach the home stretch and the roar
of the crowd became the roar of the engines.The Escort gains,pulls up along
side the Ventura.There is a hush in the crowd.
Vauxhall
Escort
Vauxhall
Vauxhall
Escort/Vauxhall(neck and neck)
Escort
Escort
>>Vauxhall
to the line .
Andrew Phillips WINS
The screen shows Andrew and Brugga hugging.
Picture fades.The sound of revving engines is heard,as the screen goes
black.
MICKEY HUTCHISON
MINI COOPER S
Two cars race to the "Hammer Bend".First Micheal Gill driving a 1600
Datsun,followed closely by Mickey Hutchison driving a Mini Cooper S. Both
cars modified to the hilt.A great 'tug up'.The little mini has the crowd
shouting.The datsun is faster. Micheal Gill owns bushy park.Little
mini-Mickey Hutchinson tries his best to pass Mike Gill.The race is
over.Mike Gill wins.They laugh with each other.
The screen shows a still shot of a man smiling next to his car.The sound of
bag pipes can be heard in the distance.
picture fades.
(crowd in silence)
The screen lights up with the radiant smile of ANDREA TOPPIN.Her car,A
Hillman Imp,is next to her.She's being congratulated for being one of the
first woman drivers on the Bushy Park circuit.Cars drive off from the
starting grid.She's in second place.soon she's in first.She wins and
continues her victory lap.A shot of bright sunlight graces the evening and
the picture becomes blurred.As the car goes towards the 'hammer bend' her
hands are atop the roof and blue smoke is emmiting from the muffler.A long
light of sunset pulls the car towards the heavens and it disappears.
picture fades
Announcer: I trust you all enjoyed that.We need to get underway.so without
further ado we give our first ladies race..all overseas entries.
_Lexi from Boston driving a lexus
_Nubia Spice driving a honda TX
_Happy driving an opel corsa
_Nickki driving a toyota wid a chevy engine 6 cyclinders
_Flo driving a cadillac
_Sue(atlanta) driving a toyota ce modified
_Flyfish(canada)driving a nissan 2x
Announcer: a ladies races..helmets on...line up.start your engines .watch
the lights.. red orange green ... GOOOOOOO.
FLO driving a big cadillac is first off the grid.she nearly looses
control,but manuevers her way around the corner.she is passed by Sue driving
a toyota ce,followed by Nubia Spice in her blue honda tx,Lexi in a lexus is
right behind.Flyfish's nissan is next,followed by Nickki in her toyota.Last
but not least is Happy driving an opel corsa.It's a tight race.positions
changes throughout the race.
the last lap.
Nubia
Flyfish
Nickki
Happy
Flo
Lexi
Sue.
The homestretch.they are all together.bumper to bumper.Flo knocks Flyfish
out of the way.Happy runs off the road.Sue and Lexi are in ding dong battle
for third place.Nickki is second and pushing Nubia to the line.
Nickki
Nubia
Nubia
Nubia
100 yards to go
Nubia
Nickki inches closer
50- yards
Nubia
Nubia
30 yards
Nickki comes alongside
Nubia
Nubia/Nickki
10 yards
Nubia/Nickki
to the line
neck and neck
Nickki wins by an eyelash.Nubia is disappointed.
the order of finish
Nickki
Nubia
Lexi
Sue
Flo
Happy
Flyfish
There is controversy as Nickki goes on her victory lap.Flyfish takes off her
high heel shoes and punches Flo's car tyres.Flo lodges an objection with the
Racing Council.Lexi and Sue laughs at the going ons.Nubia realizes she has
won the hearts of the crowd and waves. Happy is just happy she's in Barbados
and not stuck in a German winter. The race is over and the results
stands,Flo sticks her tongue out at Flyfish and walks off.This may have to
be settled in the Canadian High Court.
Nickki's prize for winning the first race.. $500.00 us
Nubia:$350.00
Lexi:$250.00
Sue: $200.00
Flo: $150.00
Happy:$100.00
Flyfish:$50.00 and a new pair of shoes.
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RACE 2
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Gypsy: red mercedes convertible
Princess: red mercedes concertible
Kathy(from rum shop lime): red mercedes convertible
JYG: red mercedes hardtop
Arjuls: red mercedes convertible
Juls: green mercedes convertible
Announcer: wow! some rich wimmin in dis place..bowsee...look at dem
cars..cheese on bread uh wann one uh dem wimmin.hahaha
Before going to line up,each driver is checked for their custom
certificate.They have paid the $800.00 custom fee and are allowed to race.
Gypsy: car # 3
Princess; car # 10
Kathy: car # 16 wid a picture of Ole Skule on the hood.
Juls: car # 28
Arjuls: car # 36
JYG; car # 111 reggae music blasting from speakers-Morgan Heritage--~~you
don't haffe dread to be rasta~~
line up
ready get set
green light
Mercedes Convertibles move slowly around the track.Gypsy and Princess are in
the lead,followed by Juls and Arjuls.Kathy is on her cell phone,talking to
Ole Skule--A LOVE THANG. JYG is last,but her music is pumping up the
crowd.she's bobbing her head to the sweet reggae beat.On the last lap
princess overtakes Gypsy and wins.
--CARS AND DRIVERS
BAJANSOONER- ford escort--Bullit borrowed from brugga johnson
Merna Ferdericks-lamborghini--cheeese on... de car look good,but the driver
looks better
OlE SKULE - modified fiat
Lucifer- BMW-- music blaring from the speakers
Bajangal(atl)-2000,Nissan Altima with manual transmission,.chrome wheels and
big able sound system..playing de latest BERES HAMMOND.the license plate
reads--D BAJAN..
Splashy-toyota celica--loves her soca music,especially VOLCANO by RPB
PEACHES-holden torano--an australian car
STONE-an Explorer--suv--sponsored by de medics band
JB-honda accord--New York plates with the bajan tag on the front window
Harold B-vauhall victor
Micheal O'dowd-mini cooper S
GEMSWICK-toyota ss--sponsored by equity mort.inc.
Gleske-lexus--powered by a KROSS engine,wid 6 cynlinders of raw
power..nuff soca playing in dis car
Alan R-vauxhall viva--modified
CJ-nissan vx--florida krew
RIO(mario layne)-convertible bmw-- wide wheels,modified to the hilt
Trifle-lexus
Peggy-ferari
Margaret-porche
Stephen Mendes-ford escort
Erica V-saab convertible
SweetMM-honda vx
(to be continued)
wait up--I wouldn't be too long
love wunna bad
dennis young
(DEV)
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