BARBADOS I WANNA STAY
A story by DENNIS YOUNG
CARS
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sun blazing hot.
DRIVERS
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DIVA -a Morgan- hand built car made in Britain.Diva either got
nuff money or a rich boyfriend.
JB-Toyota-New York plates.
Pudding-Jaguar XJ12-This woman got a figure.she is wearing a
tight-fitting racing outfit.Five men run over to her.they all want to be
chosen as the person who pulls up her zip and puts on her helmet.she's the
envy of the other women in the pit.
Dondi-Fiat Totilo--cute body,nice bumper,engines revs nicely,love
the sound it makes.Headlights cute too..nice steering. would love to take it
round a curve
The car looks ok.
Nicole H-OPEL TERRIA--a new car,beautifully prepared by 0ttam
Machines Inc.
Iere Girl(Canada)-Lamborghini Diablo Roadster VT...Its santanic
swiftness comes from a 5.7l v12 engine.5b speed beautiful machine clocks
over 200mph and can go from 0-100 in 60 seconds.
The undefeated,Iere Girl,has raced in the Indy 500 (finished 4th) and the
famous Monte Carlo(1st).Now she has entered in the Barbados race on the
BUSHY PARK REVIVAL DAY.Iere plans to win her race and donate her prize money
to a needy cause.she is dressed in her yellow and blue leathers --A picture
to burn the eyes.
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FRANKA03-JAGUAR XL36.a very nice woman
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race time
: ladies start your engines.
(i've edited out most of the cars and drivers,so i'll just mention who wins
a race).
Peaches:$500.00 (group 1)
Lexi $500.00(group 2a)
Trifle $500.00(group 3)
Diva $800.00(special car...more money--group 5)
Sweet mm $500.00(won the race on the disqualification of Kathy,who used
her cell phone while driving..this is illegal)
Nicole H $1,000.00(won 2 races)
Franka03 $800.00(add $300.00 more for being the nicest person)
Erica $400.00($100.00 deducted for being a late arrival)
Iere gal$700.00($100 given to a charity upon her request)
Dondi $400.00 ($100.00 deducted for driving without seat belts)
MernaF $800.00 (drives too fast had to entered in a race with hot
rodders.she still won)
LIZ (aussie) $500.00-Holden Tarano...very fast car.
r.Cher Balgobin $1,800.00 (drag racer extrodinaire.)
Stone $250.00 1/2 the money was given to splashy for kisses received.
JB $125.00 (fined $375.00 for habouring a criminal.while on his victory
lap,he hits a rock and the trunk goes up.Winston Hall jumps out and starts
running.He jumps over the barriers and head to the cane fields.JB is
arrested,but protests that he had only given a helping hand to someone he
met on the street.He's from New York,so he's fined and released.
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The main event-- The mix race...women and men driving together.
Lexi and a mechanic in disguise.
(car round a bend..wheels in the air...mechanic wid his head down
driver laughing with the crowd...they are disqualified for taking driving
too far..what is reffered to as..changing gears)
Erica and m
(disqualified for running people off the road)
what were they doing?
Peaches and h
(nearly caused an accident at every corner.)
Trifle and a boo
(don't know who the man is,but he's all over her like they have known each
other a long time)
Chelsea is in the house...giving trouble.she is so cute.
she walks up to her mother.she's crying and pulling at her mother's racing
outfit.
Chels: Mummy I want to go?
Trifle: no Chels..I can't take you.
Chels: Mummy Mummy I want to go?... please?
Trifle: Chels I cannot take you..this is for grown folks..you're just a
baby...you cannot go with me in the car..ok
Chels: no Mummy I want to go to the bathroom.
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Pudding and anon36
They smooch at the start.They lose the race,but find happiness in each other
arms.They drive to a grass piece for more smooching.
--UH OH--
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LIZ and an australian policeman
shimp on the barbie
3 xxx beers and a surfboard
Liz is running around in a short skirt.Men are looking at her and
wishing..the policeman gives them a stern look.
""look somewhere else mate"
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Splashy and stone
Together in a Pathfinder.Stone all over the dash board.Splashy slaps him
for getting too fresh.
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Bajanlissa and Ray Amstrong(krosfyah)
The music is pumping from the speakers. "come up to me and let me come up to
you."
(**more people were to be featured here,but i must move on** sorry)
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half time show..with DAVID RODIGAN.
Ladies and gentlemen...half time..grab a partner and do a thing.
first tune---one from the late great --DENNIS BROWN..the crown prince of
reggae.song call REVOLUTION.
>From there it was all vintage reggae.Old school.Tunes like AFRICA by the
MIGHTY DIAMONDS.
NIGHT NURSE-Gregory Issacs
COTTAGE IN NEGRIL--Tyrone Taylor
MARGUS GARVEY--BURNING SPEAR...followed by Big Youth's/Johnny Clarke's
version.
--
RE-START
-- drag racing
only one competitor
A WOMAN
NAME
R.Cher Balgobin.
REVSS
--0-60 3 secs. quater mile.6 seconds.
Parachute opens.
stop her from killing two cows.
She's also the envy of all the women in the pit.long hair.nice bod.the girl
has it going on..confident with a ready smile.
----
Jenn drives a Honda CXZ fully loaded.Her husband cheers her from the
stands.she wins her race.
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The second part of the race meeting is full of drama.Stone and Splashy are
arguing over who should drive the pathfinder.Stone admits he was wrong for
pretending he was changing gears and touching Splashy's legs,but he forgot
the truck was automatic.Splashy calls her boyfriend,who pushes Stone to the
ground.Stone,being an army vet,does a back flip and kicks the man in his
chest..FIGHT..the crowd are cheering the action.A Policeman arrives and
restores order.They shake hands and walk away.
In Stone's mind--the words to DMX's song--
YALL GINE MAKE ME LOSE MY MIND UP IN HERE
UP IN HERE
YALL GINE MAKE ME ACT THE FOOL UP IN HERE.
UP IN HERE
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Pudding sees her man,in the distance,talking to another woman.she blows
the horn trying to attract his attention.He ignores her.She takes out her
knife from her handbag,walks over to where he's standing.With the knife in
hand she starts cutting.
She cuts the shirt off his back.Her words spiteful
"I BUY THIS AND I KIN CUT IT UP"
(turning to de woman)
YOU WANT HE? DEN TEK HE,COZ HE EN NUH GOOD AND I DID LOOKING TO UNLOAD HE
EVER SINCE.. I GINE SEND HE CLOTHES TUH YUH HOUSE..WHEY YUH LIVE?
(turning back to the bare back Man)
UH HOPE YUH HAPPY NOW.I GINE SEND YUH SIX CHILDREN WID YUH CLOTHES.I GINE
SELL DE HOUSE AND GUH LIVE WID MUH GRANDMUDDER.YUH HANTUHMOUT $%^^%$.
--Pudding walks away singing_
I en want nuh man up under me
I en want nuh man up under me
I's uh independant woman
it depends if he got money or not
or if he can stir a pot
I en want nuh man up under me
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Sexiness,from Trinidad,runs over someone's foot with her car.It's pure
bachanal in de place.pushing and cussing.Trini versus St.Lucian.
A bajan man tries to restore order and gets cuff in he mout.De two woman
jump pon he and mausprig he tail.He wished he had kept his mout shut.De man
pon de ground bawling fuh blue murder.Sexiness sits on his head.He stops
bawling.There's a smile on his face.The st lucian woman sits on his chest.He
ent begging no more.He's got two women and he don't even know their names.
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Lexi(Miss Joy) waits for her mechanic to return.She wants him so bad.His
lean,muscular body had made her wish out loud.
""uh want he so bad""
He returns with tools in hand
""can you check out my engine,I think it's mis-firing"'
The mechanic looks at her,winks and softly whispers
"wait for me,i'll be back"
Miss Joy miss chiviously pinched his butt as he walks away.
He had to ask permission from the stewards to take the Lexus and Lexi for a
test run.
round and round and round,the race track,they go.
Miss joy in de front seat,wid de man
de man changing gears,but de car's automatic
she want a stick
shift
He checks the dashboard.
It's bubbling in the car
heat and steam
The crowd is in a hush
perspiration in the car
heat in de place.
They are disqaulified
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T O'dowd is driving a Mini Cooper S. A O'dowd is driving a Vauxhall Vectra
specially imported from London,England.They decide to race each other.Around
the final bend Tony is in the lead.Anne takes a rock out of her
handbag,throws it and breaks Tony's back window.While he checks to see what
had happened,Ane sneaks up from behind and pass him.A complaint is lodge,but
is overturn on the grounds that what ever happens between husband and wife
is nobody's business but their own.
Tony is happy.His wife has given him $200.00 and a sexy look.
--
Bajansooner tries to control the Bullitt(Ford Escort),but knocks down the
barrier.He has to pay Brugga Johnson for any damage he causes.He had revved
the engine,sliped it into first gear,came off the clutch suddenly.whheelsss
screamed and Bajansooner screams with joy.He has it under control,but his
joy is short-lived,when he realizes the car is heading for Consett Bay.He
makes a mental note to send his credit card number and the deed to his house
to Brugga.He's having fun,because women are waving at him.He feels like a
king.
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JO and Ric hooked up for the mix race,they fell in love before he changed to
third gear.She had seen him ealier playing in the warm up band--THE ODD 4.He
had seen her dancing to a funk song.After he came off stage he walked over
and enquired of her name.She reluntantly gave it.They exchaned phone numbers
and planned to meet at a club later that night.They drove around the track
and by the end of the race,they had won each other's hearts.
(awwwww)
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Happy from Germany brought out her secret weapon-- A MINI MOKE fitted with a
Porsche engine.no doors.no windows.pure speed.she challenges Cher B to a
drag race.
Cher B laughs,but take up the challenge.
the air is tense,the crowd quiet.
--revving engines.
ready
get set go
green light.
Cher B leaves Happy standing.
parachute comes out and Cher B wins.
Happy is still coming down the track..but wait..wait she's not
stopping..she's... she's heading towards the barriers.She knocks it down and
oh no,... she nearly kills two cows and a cane cutter.Her head is bobbing in
and out of the car.she's shouting...HEEEEEELPPPP ....HELP ME SOMEBODY...she
is saved by the quick thinking Esaf,who does a good imitation of John
Wayne.He lassoes the mini moke while he rides a raliegh bicycle.It's
fantastic.The crowd shouts his name::
::ESAF! ESAF!.
Two drunken man hears this and orders coconut water to go with the rum.
Esaf white rum.
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Mad Q stands beside the hillman imp,a dash of sadness in his eyes.It was the
first time he would be driving the car..the car which made Andrea famous.The
race begins.
round the
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>>cars are close to each other.Mad q is third.two more laps.He is second.The
>>car,in front,is much faster.He's twenty yards behind and decides to settle
>>for second,but suddenly he hears a voice.It urges him on.He moves closer
>>and closer.It's the last lap.Around the hammer bend,closer and closer.Soon
>>they are side by side.Mad q gives it one more effort.He takes the lead.He
>>wins.
A small prayer.
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Rio should have been on a flight back to Texas,but instead he's at Bushy
Park,kidnapped by women.He's driving a Mercedes convertible.Rio is
disqualified for driving with six women in the race.He doesn't
protest,because all of the woman have pernament smiles on their faces
He dunks the ball
watch out Alan Iverson
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MZ BAJAN POET arrives late driving a Volvo 929.In her race she's so hard
core.She squeezes through every space..bumping and wining to win her
race.The other drivers protest for interferance,but Ms Bajan Poet has such
way with words,the stewards fall in love with her voice and fight over who
should be first to take her out to dinner.
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DJ Tony(trinidadian) arrives in a Mitsubitshi lx 2800,sponsored by IBIS INTL
SOUND SYSTEM.In his race the competition is fierce,but his tenacity sees him
through.He wins and celebrates with the song--Iron bazoobe blaring from his
speakers.
BACK TO THE MAIN CHARACTERS---
Duawee and Veronica are holding and whispering in each other's ear,soft
melodic tones.
V: I love you so much,I don't want to leave.
D: Please don't mention leaving..I want you to stay.With your experience we
could find you a good job and we could live together. what do you think?
V:(kisses lips)baby I know,but..but..I must go,I have to get back to my job
and family..I wish I could stay,but I can't.we both have a future and if
it's with each other,then it'll be..I ..I ..I
Water forms in her eyes and falls down her cheeks.Duawee kisses her tears
away.Two little girls see this act of love and start to giggle.
D:Don't cry.I want you to remember that I love you..
V:(sniffing) scchnn..I know you do and I feel the same way.I wished we had
more time together,so we could get to know each other better.
D: You're right.It's been a hectic two weeks,people constantly in our lives
and we longing to be with each other.It's like something is pulling us away.
V: Maybe we could spend that time tonight.
D: yes..
kisses and long hugs.
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The engines and the crowd roar.
--
630pm clock.
As the crowd leaves a sound system plays the latest songs.
(to be continued)
To the people of the Mendes chat room
I would like to thank all of you for your assistance in writing this
episode.I have had an enjoyable time,but the time has come for me to say
goodbye.I will not be in the chat room anymore.My reasons are many and need
not be discussed.Love you and wish you all the best for the future.
To me people.
bfly.nickki.peaches.jb.trifle.stone.princess A.
esaf.diva.sweetmm.socrates.didi(dd).raven.madq.erica.nubia
spice.missjoy.pudding.ieregirl.bajangirl.
jyg.gleske.HB.and all the other chatters.
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