BARBADOS I WANNA STAY
A story by DENNIS YOUNG
The lovers are locked in a tight embrace
unbutton shirt flaps in the night wind.
kisses all over.
waves rushing to the shore,witnessing.
fever burns inside....
Gently,turning her head,he kisses her eyelids and neck.She becomes a
cresendo of moans,rising through the sound of waves and crickets.Feet
meshing between the sand.The glow of moon lending light to the pursuit.
Questions takes shape in her head..her mind rushes for answers.
(what am I doing here?)
(ughh...mmmmm)
(If I give myself to him...ughhh..ohhh..what happens then.Does he run back
to Wendy,while I uhhh ahhhhh foolishly wait in vain ooohhh.)
(No...I must stop this...mmnn.)
She pushes him away.He searches for a reason.
Veronica: I'm sorry ..I just can't...take me home please.
No answer.A sudden jerk movement brings clothing together.
Disappointment rage and mellow.Rage and mellow within him.He has no
words.They walk towards the car.No hands a-holding,No eyes a-meeting,No love
a-showing....NOTHING.
REASONS appear in his mind.He examines.
(It must have been her shyness...the surroundings..that's it..she isn't
accustom to this.We'll have to wait.maybe this isn't meant to be.I want to
love her like no other has been or will be again.If this was some other
woman I would've by now.but...but..the situation is never perfect.what can
we do? when will the right time come?)
He hugs her and warmth returns.Sand fall from their feet.They sit in
silence.Veronica fills her eyes with the night's beauty,storing it into
memory.A moonlit beam finds a glint of water hanging on her eyelids.Her face
reveals a woman being torn apart by sadness.Water begins to flow,finding
rest on Duawee's shoulders.
Gripping her tightly,his heart begs her to stay.She stops and raises her
head.Face to face she finds his lips waiting.The kiss is passionate.
She loves him.Her heart beats faster.Questions???.
"I..I'm sorry for the way I acted earlier,but I'm so confuse."
"What's the matter baby? What's troubling you?"
""You know I love you...right? and i'll do anything to be with you.. From
the first time I saw you.I've had so many impulses,so many emotions..when
i'm with you ..I feel so comfortable..days end and begin with you..feelings
of 'I need to stay' burn within me.. and the more i'm with you..the more
these feelings hurt.After I leave will you still be there for me? When I
call and tell you I love you.Will you hear and feel me? Will our love fade
as soon as nights have stretch our patience.Will you wait for me?""
He looks into her eyes.A soft light brushing her face.Chocolate brown woman
with haunting eyes.A beauty deep.He is lost for words.words tremble and
steady flow.
"Veronica, I love you too."
Words making a feeble sound.Insufficient.Her eyes beg for an answer.
"D,is that all you have to say? you love me. Why are you diluting this
moment we have?..my last night with you.Why are you using the word love so
flimsy.Is that all you have to say..you love me,tell me how much you love
me..go on Mr Maynard tell me...tell me how much."
He looks at her,half smiling,half surprise.Her outburst leaves him numb for
a moment.serious.Words form in his head and through his lips they fly.
"Veronica,you are feeling the effects of what love does to us.your leaving
tomorrow,has left me with feelings,so deep I cannot find nor describe them
to you.Two weeks ago I met a very beautiful woman.We danced,we laughed,we
shared some very special moments,we became one. we found love.we love each
other,but what is love? can you tell me?"
She looks at him.
No words.
No answer given.
]Anger subsides.
He continues.]
""I feel love whenever i'm with you.I need you every minute of my day.
and tomorrow we'll see how we both deal with goodbye.Come here,let me kiss
your lips. Let me k**ss them (sssup).V,let me love you .let me love you
like there's no tomorrow,because with you gone there's no tomorrow.I could
love you once in so many different ways.That's the love I have for you.""
She squeezes his hands.
"I could've been a playboy,but as you've noticed i'm not like that.My strong
upbringing would not let sink so low to prey on women.I couldn't do
that.it's demoralising... we have grown wiser.you have taught me so many
things about myself and I hope you have learnt many things about me and my
country.You and I.What do we do with these words? Do we keep them together
to make small sentences or do we shout them out loud,so the whole world
knows about our love?I know now I love you.Just as you've ask me i'll ask
you.Will you go back to America and fall into waiting arms or will you one
day,run out of patience and end it?.How do we keep loving,when loneliness
invades everyday? How do we win? Can you tell me? How will you handle a long
distance relationship?"
Veronica feels uncomfortable and tries to nullify his words by rubbing sand
off her feet.
Veronica: I know I can handle it,but will you be able to wait for me.Here
you'll have Wendy,at least.I have no one.I did have someone,but that's all
in the past.I'm looking at my future and I want you in it.
He found the answer to the puzzle and Wendy fit perfectly.
"Why are you so worried about Wendy.It's over between us.We are friends and
that's all."
Veronica's mood changes.
"let's go home.it's late"
Anger boils/subsides with the car's engine.
smoke emitting huffing/puffing
changing gears for a smoother ride
CALM
silence through the night.Homeward bound
The days are over.
leaving paradise brings sadness
as departure day approaches
night falls suddenly
making and breaking hearts
two weeks
two.too weak
from the goodbye love
searching long and hard for answers
to fill a void
within their hearts.
Night sounds of crickets fill the dark bringing a sudden change to the icy
atmosphere.Silence breaks and words flow freely.Laughter punctuates and
resounds.HOME.
She runs to the bathroom for relief.With the light off,she plays scenes from
tomorrow,in her head,projecting the beginning and end of her goodbye.Picture
frame by picture frame.A dark,sad room.In her head she sees him again.It's
the first day.He's walking on the beach,the blue sea forming a beautiful
backdrop.A sweet song from his lips reaching her ears and her heart.
The words rise and fall.
"you tell me to fuhget
that my grandmudder was born right hay so
aww right I say I shall go
but I hope you'll understand
how I feel 'bout EMMERTON
my home land..my home land
my home land
and you know it's true
that'll I'll never never forgive you
cause looka whu yuh gone and do
to my Emmerton"
**WORDS--ANTHONY "GABBY" CARTER.
At the end tears break through a captured pain,rushing forward,pasting her
face wet.
stiffled sound.run water.
flow in the dark.
(Fans lament)
Veronica
do you feel the hurt?
how much can you bear?
how much love do you feel?
Veronica
if you leave
you may hurt forever
so please, please stay
because if you stay
you'll make Duawee's day
stay,Veronica,please stay.
Veronica..hushed voices are begging you to stay.
MAMA TEE KA PAH.
(end)
She whispers a prayer,both hands covering her face.
"Lord,I thank you for a wonderful holiday.Thank you for letting me meet
Duawee and all the other people of this wonderful Island.Please help me to
be strong in your care.Bless Duawee and his family.Show him how much I
care,not just with words,but by actions.Show him what my love will do for
him.I thank you.amen.
Her hands are wet with tears.
Duawee decides he would write her a letter.In the letter his heart is
scrawling like blue ink across his soul.He pours his life unto the
white-lined paper,each word pressed into undying love.He signs his
name,curling the EE's into a shape of a heart.He folds the paper into the
envelope while listening for the end of running water.The bathroom door
opens. Veronica's eyes shows visible signs of heartbreak.She sits on his lap
and rubs her hands over his head.
D,will you help me pack?
yes baby,as soon as I have my shower.
(kiss)
do you really love me?
I do and I'll miss you
how much?
V,not again?
I just want to hear you say it....please,please tell me...or I'll tickle
you.
she pushes her hands in,moving her fingers frantically.He tries to contain
his laughter.Fails.
tell me tell me....tell me how much
I.... aaaaahhe aaa ahhee do...I do aaaa>hee I ddddooo love you.
ok,I'll stop now.
The finger play turns serious.Lips giving warm,sensual kisses.Knots of sweet
pain rise inside,making them shiver.wanting and waiting.Veronica couldn't
contain herself.Her fingers explores the well sculptured body. She finds a
secret and listens to his 'AHHH'.His eyes blink with a suddeness and she
smiles to herself.THE PHONE RINGS.
FOUR TIMES..BRNNGG BRNGGG BRNNGG BRNGGG..the answer machine picks up a
voice.
"Hello Duawee please call me back as soon as you get in thank you"
Kisses stop in the middle of the message.Their ears prick to recognise the
faintly voice.Veronica pulls herself away from her loving stance,allowing
Duawee to play the message again.
click...sshshhjsh...click
"Hello Duawee please call me back as soon as you get in thank you"
They look at each other.Disappointment and surprise all over their faces.
TO BE CONTINUED
DEV
__TO all my friends and fans.I know you have been waiting for the
love-making scene,but I have to make it special.When it's time you'll
know,but will you be ready?
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