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BARBADOS I WANNA STAY

A story by DENNIS YOUNG



The door closes.She's alone.All of her paradise days have ended.Soon she

will depart with much haste,leaving depair within.

Weary,no longer eager to leave,she packs suitcases.Her mind switches back to

the days and nights with Duawee. Questions?



(How could I love him so soon? Why do I feel this way? What am I going to

do without him? )



Her lips widens to a smile.The bed welcomes her.She drifts into sleep.Ten

minutes later she awakes,finishes her packing,then rushes to the

shower..COOL WATER. Wrap in towel,drying hair,looking in the mirror,Veronica

finds herself missing him,wanting him bad.She aches.Her pain runs.A tear

surfaces.She squeezes it from her eyes.It free-falls down her cheeks.A

desolate tear,from a heart break. Lying on the bed,her eyes rotates with the

moving ceiling fan.Sleep comes and dream invades.

..--..

Back..



The night air was clean and fresh.Duawee brought the car to a halt,then

followed the path to a door.A kiss greeted him.He felt a sudden urge to

release his fustrations.A woman in a short dress moved away from him,her

body enticing.



::"Duawee I'm so glad you came.I didn't have any other choice,but to call.I

feel so lonely."



::::" well why don't you do something about it? your loneliness I mean."



::"I would if I could just find someone.Have you any ideas?"



::::"no I haven't...could I have a glass of water please?"



::"ok...flip the switch on the radio.I feel like dancing."





She walkED(((**** away from him.he finds the air punishable,yet enticing.he

turns the power on and flips the CD switch.mood music softens his

aggitation.The song:OCEAN OF THOUGHTS AND DREAMS.



:I go by the sea at night

and watch the moon reflect it's light

when I tried to forget about you

all I do is dream about you

and my mind keeps drifting...drifting away

upon this ocean of thoughts and dreams:





She held out her hand for a dance.A long flowing dress entices him to

committ the dance.It's been a long time for her.She hadn't felt a man in

ages.Her heart and hands trembled at his touch of his.The urge rose in her

and the words of the song became visible behind her closed eyes.Nervousness

played it's part.Her head upon his chest,their bodies become one.The song

ended,allowing time for her to shift her hands from his and wrap them around

his body.Another song:I GET CARRIED AWAY.



The words torched him and seduced her.They both got carried away.She pulls

him towards the bedroom,the words followed.



(I just get carried away..walking with you baby)



There,in the dark,two people.A bed summoned.The glow from the other room

creeped between the darkness leaving silouettes on the walls ..shadows in

perpetual motion.she whispered.



* I need you so much..tonight make me yours.... forever..I ..I caaaann stop

looo ving you.*



*hush baby.Let's make this night special.



*ok DUAWEE...I'll be quiet..huhhh. I just feel so real ...it's like we are

meant for each other.huhhhh.Like there's nothing to stop us.. do you waaant

me to turn off the music?



*NO...let it play...





small breaths inhaled/exhaled from lungs suspended by moments.slow

motion,between kisses,became a rush of river water flow.



Together in rapture.



*I love you so much.How could you stay away so long? How could you?



*I love you too.



*Then make me feel like you love me..make love to me



*shssshh..I'm gonna make you mine tonight.



He kisses her eyelids,tip of her nose.Her fingers dug deeper into his

skin,making love and the want of pleasure surge within.Outstretched arms

welcome him.



ice cold

melts

into water

making liquid

soft on the tongue.



hearts beating fast.



Long,hard kisses burn with desire and the approaching fullfillment

unleased unruly sounds with bajan tones.Echoes in his ear inspired him into

the life-saver technique--**(Edited out-- not the lifesaver you might be

thinking about).



Gasps..gasps in the middle. breaths Rushing in and out.Fingers crawl down

the small of his back.Tips of mountains.

Stroking hair backwards to view her face etched in pain.A sweet pain.

To her,it

felt like sun shining through pouring rain.She imagined all sorts of places

with beautiful paintings.He had captured her in the most poignant

position.vulnerable yet strong.

The opening of curtains with lavish sunlight bathing the room.Running water

flood the room and discovered a scream... shaking heads



do

.... DUAAAA..WWEEEE PLease...do.. duaa.aaaa ..aaa.. weeee



trembling fingers grab and scratch flesh...making imprints of draining love

...crawl

down his back.

The melt down

into soft tones.. a hiccup feel..jumps within..bajan words

folllwed each earthquake.



He rose up like a mountain bear..and escaped into a forest.

Dived into river water,,,as it flowed.Him and Her..the envelop of love

ways.. end of the begining.. the ultimate love making..with whispers in the

semi-dark



:: "I love you Duawee..I always will"



::::" and I love you.. nothing will ever take this away from us"



::"yes that's true. Do you have to go?"



::::"yes I must ...I have something to do..but don't let us spoil this

moment with a rush..let's lay here and enjoy what our love means."



::"ok I wish you wouldn't leave Duawee..I.. I wish you'd stay"



::::" maybe another time..but I do have to leave."



::"ok next time"





She turned around and he felt her pain as she wept.The minutes drifted into

an hour and he left,but not before his lips had planted a kiss on her

eyelids.She had stirred and pushed her welcoming arms around his neck.He

came down with solid kiss on her lips.She wanted more.He was generous.





The car spun around and disappeared into the night...gone gone..



((((WHAT HAPPENS TO BROKEN HEARTS?))))







The moon witnesses.



She is waiting.



__TO BE CONTINUED__



DEV





TO Happy,Rochelle,Quiet,British Queen,Nubia,*Molly,Stone,Anfaani,Polar

Bear,Pudds,Pudding and Souse,Nickki and Others..hold tight..it's coming.


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