| BARBADOS I WANNA STAYA story by DENNIS YOUNG
 
 The door closes.She's alone.All of her paradise days have ended.Soon she
 
 will depart with much haste,leaving depair within.
 
 Weary,no longer eager to leave,she packs suitcases.Her mind switches back to
 
 the days and nights with Duawee. Questions?
 
 
 
 (How could I love him so soon? Why do I feel this way? What am I going to
 
 do without him? )
 
 
 
 Her lips widens to a smile.The bed welcomes her.She drifts into sleep.Ten
 
 minutes later she awakes,finishes her packing,then rushes to the
 
 shower..COOL WATER. Wrap in towel,drying hair,looking in the mirror,Veronica
 
 finds herself missing him,wanting him bad.She aches.Her pain runs.A tear
 
 surfaces.She squeezes it from her eyes.It free-falls down her cheeks.A
 
 desolate tear,from a heart break. Lying on the bed,her eyes rotates with the
 
 moving ceiling fan.Sleep comes and dream invades.
 
 ..--..
 
 Back..
 
 
 
 The night air was clean and fresh.Duawee brought the car to a halt,then
 
 followed the path to a door.A kiss greeted him.He felt a sudden urge to
 
 release his fustrations.A woman in a short dress moved away from him,her
 
 body enticing.
 
 
 
 ::"Duawee I'm so glad you came.I didn't have any other choice,but to call.I
 
 feel so lonely."
 
 
 
 ::::" well why don't you do something about it? your loneliness I mean."
 
 
 
 ::"I would if I could just find someone.Have you any ideas?"
 
 
 
 ::::"no I haven't...could I have a glass of water please?"
 
 
 
 ::"ok...flip the switch on the radio.I feel like dancing."
 
 
 
 
 
 She walkED(((**** away from him.he finds the air punishable,yet enticing.he
 
 turns the power on and flips the CD switch.mood music softens his
 
 aggitation.The song:OCEAN OF THOUGHTS AND  DREAMS.
 
 
 
 :I go by the sea at night
 
 and watch the moon reflect it's light
 
 when I tried to forget about you
 
 all I do is dream about you
 
 and my mind keeps drifting...drifting away
 
 upon this ocean of thoughts and dreams:
 
 
 
 
 
 She held out her hand for a dance.A long flowing dress entices him to
 
 committ the dance.It's been a long time for her.She hadn't felt a man in
 
 ages.Her heart and hands trembled at his touch of his.The urge rose in her
 
 and the words of the song became visible behind her closed eyes.Nervousness
 
 played it's part.Her head upon his chest,their bodies become one.The song
 
 ended,allowing time for her to shift her hands from his and wrap them around
 
 his  body.Another song:I GET CARRIED AWAY.
 
 
 
 The words torched him and seduced her.They both got carried away.She pulls
 
 him towards the bedroom,the words followed.
 
 
 
 (I just get carried away..walking with you baby)
 
 
 
 There,in the dark,two people.A bed summoned.The glow from the other room
 
 creeped between the darkness leaving silouettes  on the walls ..shadows in
 
 perpetual motion.she  whispered.
 
 
 
 * I need you so much..tonight make me yours.... forever..I ..I caaaann stop
 
 looo ving you.*
 
 
 
 *hush baby.Let's make this night special.
 
 
 
 *ok DUAWEE...I'll be quiet..huhhh. I just feel so real ...it's like we are
 
 meant for each other.huhhhh.Like there's nothing to stop us..  do you waaant
 
 me to turn off the music?
 
 
 
 *NO...let it play...
 
 
 
 
 
 small breaths inhaled/exhaled from lungs suspended by moments.slow
 
 motion,between kisses,became a rush of river water flow.
 
 
 
 Together in rapture.
 
 
 
 *I love you so much.How could you stay away so long? How could you?
 
 
 
 *I love you too.
 
 
 
 *Then make me feel like you love me..make love  to me
 
 
 
 *shssshh..I'm gonna make you mine tonight.
 
 
 
 He kisses her eyelids,tip of her nose.Her fingers dug deeper into his
 
 skin,making love and the want of pleasure surge within.Outstretched arms
 
 welcome him.
 
 
 
 ice cold
 
 melts
 
 into water
 
 making liquid
 
 soft on the tongue.
 
 
 
 hearts beating fast.
 
 
 
 Long,hard kisses burn with desire and the approaching fullfillment
 
 unleased unruly sounds with bajan tones.Echoes in his ear inspired him into
 
 the life-saver technique--**(Edited out-- not the lifesaver you might be
 
 thinking about).
 
 
 
 Gasps..gasps in the  middle. breaths Rushing in and out.Fingers crawl down
 
 the small of his back.Tips of mountains.
 
 Stroking hair backwards to view her face etched in pain.A sweet pain.
 
 To her,it
 
 felt like sun shining through pouring rain.She imagined all sorts of places
 
 with beautiful paintings.He had captured her in the most poignant
 
 position.vulnerable yet strong.
 
 The opening of curtains with lavish sunlight bathing the room.Running water
 
 flood the room  and discovered a  scream... shaking heads
 
 
 
 do
 
 ....   DUAAAA..WWEEEE  PLease...do..  duaa.aaaa ..aaa.. weeee
 
 
 
 trembling fingers grab and scratch flesh...making imprints of draining love
 
 ...crawl
 
 down his back.
 
 The melt down
 
 into soft tones.. a hiccup feel..jumps within..bajan words
 
 folllwed each earthquake.
 
 
 
 He rose up like a mountain bear..and escaped into a forest.
 
 Dived into river water,,,as it flowed.Him and Her..the envelop of love
 
 ways.. end of the begining.. the ultimate love making..with whispers in the
 
 semi-dark
 
 
 
 :: "I love you Duawee..I always will"
 
 
 
 ::::" and I love you.. nothing will ever take this away from us"
 
 
 
 ::"yes that's true.  Do you have to go?"
 
 
 
 ::::"yes  I must ...I have something to do..but don't let us spoil this
 
 moment with a rush..let's lay here and enjoy what our love means."
 
 
 
 ::"ok I wish you wouldn't leave Duawee..I.. I wish you'd stay"
 
 
 
 ::::" maybe another time..but I do have to leave."
 
 
 
 ::"ok next time"
 
 
 
 
 
 She turned around and he felt her pain as she wept.The minutes drifted into
 
 an hour and he left,but not before his lips had planted a kiss on her
 
 eyelids.She had stirred and pushed her welcoming arms around his neck.He
 
 came down with solid kiss on her lips.She wanted more.He was generous.
 
 
 
 
 
 The car spun around and disappeared into the night...gone   gone..
 
 
 
 ((((WHAT HAPPENS TO BROKEN HEARTS?))))
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 The moon witnesses.
 
 
 
 She is waiting.
 
 
 
 __TO BE CONTINUED__
 
 
 
 DEV
 
 
 
 
 
 TO Happy,Rochelle,Quiet,British Queen,Nubia,*Molly,Stone,Anfaani,Polar
 
 Bear,Pudds,Pudding and Souse,Nickki and Others..hold tight..it's coming.
 
 
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